evalana
Weather-Girl
President of the Back Seat
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Post by evalana on Jan 19, 2010 19:50:15 GMT -5
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Post by norwegianwolf on Jan 20, 2010 13:19:41 GMT -5
I love them. ^^
I better write some of my own one day. Too bad my English is bad.
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Post by vhills on Feb 28, 2010 9:27:18 GMT -5
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Post by vhills on Mar 7, 2010 11:31:05 GMT -5
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Post by vhills on Apr 9, 2010 10:32:37 GMT -5
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Post by KJ on Apr 9, 2010 20:15:59 GMT -5
Great story, I was beging to wonder were Brent was
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Post by vhills on Apr 10, 2010 4:46:28 GMT -5
yeah, was time i brought him in ... x) thank you!
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Post by vhills on Jun 11, 2010 12:46:43 GMT -5
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Dec 27, 2010 11:08:54 GMT -5
will you be finishing!?!?!?! i hope you do...
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Post by vhills on Dec 28, 2010 9:19:31 GMT -5
i really should, it's just so long ago i started it and i'm afraid the characters won't be in character anymore :/ plus a lack of time and a writers block of course~. T.T
I'LL TRY THOUGH, I PROMISE.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 28, 2010 12:16:15 GMT -5
Good idea.
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Post by Gemstone108 on May 8, 2011 13:48:29 GMT -5
these are great fanfics
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Post by vhills on Nov 9, 2013 6:50:00 GMT -5
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Post by smf on Nov 9, 2013 9:21:28 GMT -5
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! So. HAPPEH! *Minor note: I found an "All of the sudden" that should probably be "All of a sudden". Also, "left him be" could probably be "let him be". And "strip it over his head" should be "strap it over his head." Another note: "Advantage point" should probably be just "Vantage point". Also, there's something off about "the strong men to gather around the circle". Final note: some tense trouble in "they're having", later down the page. I notice these typos wherever I go to read fic, apologies. XP* BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WONDERFUL! *Squees about how you still have everyone right, and that you showed Manny's eyes! And you quoted the second movie! And MACARONI GUY! \o/ *Flails more* You are awesome; this is simply more proof of that. ^_^
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Post by Deleted on Nov 9, 2013 11:47:24 GMT -5
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