Post by vhills on Nov 9, 2013 12:34:29 GMT -5
So. HAPPEH!
*Minor note: I found an "All of the sudden" that should probably be "All of a sudden". Also, "left him be" could probably be "let him be". And "strip it over his head" should be "strap it over his head." Another note: "Advantage point" should probably be just "Vantage point". Also, there's something off about "the strong men to gather around the circle". Final note: some tense trouble in "they're having", later down the page. I notice these typos wherever I go to read fic, apologies. XP*
BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WONDERFUL! *Squees about how you still have everyone right, and that you showed Manny's eyes! And you quoted the second movie! And MACARONI GUY! \o/ *Flails more* You are awesome; this is simply more proof of that. ^_^
THANK. YOU. SO. MUCH. --tackleglomps smf--
this is how you realize english is not my first language. ;] i've got rid of those mistakes, thanks for pointing them out! and i'm so glad you like it! i was worrrrried.
Nov 9, 2013 11:47:24 GMT -5 @abnormal1000 said:
V-HILLS! Thank you for updating! I've waited SOOOOOOOO LOOOOOOONG! It's on of my fav stories on there.As for me...heres one f my stories:
www.fanfiction.net/s/9804244/1/CWACOM-Bloopers
NOW YOU TELL ME HOW TO GET RID OF THAT GRIN ON MY FACE THIS INSTANT. oh holy batman, i've got tears in my eyes. these bloopers are hilarious. i can totally see them happen. i think my favourite is the one with the mayor. i almost toppled off my chair myself! why don't they make theeeeese ...
and ooohhh, you were one of those who actually waited?! I'M SORRY! with fanfictioning comes great responsibility it seems. you know, the offer with those torches still counts ...