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Post by smf on Oct 10, 2013 19:32:19 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by fldsmdfr232 on Oct 10, 2013 19:45:21 GMT -5
I would like to see more!
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Post by engagefanficbreak on Oct 10, 2013 19:58:01 GMT -5
Me, too! this is really great!
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Post by smf on Oct 11, 2013 16:46:06 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, thanks you guys! So, EFF, what do you like specifically about my writings? EDIT: In the meantime, have something adorable. ~ "Mew?" Okay, Flint thought to himself. That was new. He got up from his admittedly-too-comfortable Comfinator chair to go find the source of the noise. It had been a quiet night at Sparkswood, apart from the ambient background noise produced by the nocturnal Foodimals. Everyone else, however, was asleep. Except for Flint himself, for some reason. "Mew! Mewmew." He crept quietly about the premises, trying to find where the noise was the loudest. It seemed to be the kitchen, surprisingly enough. The lights were off, but Flint could also hear a small rustling coming from inside the room. He turned the lights on and- Well, this was a sight to see. A large group of Marshmallows had arranged themselves into a stack, and they were trying to open the cabinet. They had immediately fallen over when he turned on the light, but it wasn't hard to imagine what they were up to - they were trying to free their imagined comrades! Flint tried not to laugh too loudly. The Marshmallows were really adorable, but this wasn't the time. While most of the Marshmallows shrunk away from Flint after being "caught", a few brave ones moved up to him. "Mew?" "Aw, it's alright little fellas." Flint said. "I'm not going to hurt you. Now, why were you trying to open that cabinet?" One of the Marshmallows made a motion as if to point at the cabinet, then made the same motion towards the other Marshmallows. "So you were trying to rescue your friends?" "Mew!" That was a yes, then. "No, there aren't any of your friends in there. Do you want me to show you?" "Mew." Another confirmation. "Alrighty then." Flint went to the cabinet (the Marshmallows backed up to allow him free movement) and took out a bag of normal marshmallows. He showed some of the individual marshmallows to the group, then put those normal marshmallows back in and sealed the bag. "See? They're not like you. No friends to worry about here!" He had thought of eating some of the marshmallows, but immediately decided not to. It would have been like if he watched someone eat an exceedingly humanoid gingerbread man! "Mewmewmew. Mew!" "Okay, buddies. You have to go back outside, now. Okay?" "Mew!" "Alright, I'll show you the way out." Flint did, and got some final cuddles from the Marshmallows as a result. "Goodnight to you all!" "Mewmew!" ~ (Yes, the Marshmallows probably don't meow. XD)
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Post by ral365 on Oct 12, 2013 11:56:31 GMT -5
The marshmallows made some sorta noise like that in the movie ^^
Awww, so cute! They think the bag of regular marshmallows is full of their friends! :> Lovely work! <3
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2013 12:38:59 GMT -5
You're a really good author! *coughs* better than mine *coughs* Do you have fanfiction? you should make one!
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Post by smf on Oct 12, 2013 12:41:30 GMT -5
Aw, thanks, both of you! ^^; You're all so nice. And no, ab, I don't have a fanfiction. It's probably best to limit where my accounts are. I can beta your works, if you'd like!
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Post by Yellow Dragon on Oct 29, 2013 8:49:14 GMT -5
Oh. Your new stories are very good too. And I think that your idea about perfectly fits into the second movie plot.
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Post by smf on Oct 29, 2013 16:35:53 GMT -5
Really! How? Er, thank you! I honestly don't know how to feel about that. That's okay though.
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Post by Gemstone108 on Oct 29, 2013 16:40:33 GMT -5
Marshmallows! This was just too cute.
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Post by smf on Oct 29, 2013 16:49:56 GMT -5
Thank you! It was a drabble, honestly - it really just stemmed out from the idea that the Marshmallows "Mew"ed! I also had something else in mind (( girlyyy.com/go/329) <- this strip, in fact), but that's beside the point.
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Post by Yellow Dragon on Oct 30, 2013 16:31:57 GMT -5
Really! How? Er, thank you! I honestly don't know how to feel about that. That's okay though. I meant not all the plot details of your fanfictions (they are really good, though), but the idea of sentient and initially kind , who ended up making something really nice after rebooting.
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Post by smf on Oct 30, 2013 17:10:41 GMT -5
Oh! ^^ Thank you! That actually sort of was what I intended. It's great that it happened in canon in some form, though.
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Post by vhills on Nov 8, 2013 6:42:14 GMT -5
finally got around to browse through this thread! AMAZING. i thouroughly enjoyed reading your stories and promts, you've got a very good mix of genres here which i really like. i would never dare to even try to write in the machine's perspective, but i think you nailed it. i really fell for the now. do these just flow right out of your fingertips, it's really impressing! also, mew! please more pretty please k'thanks bye! x3
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Post by smf on Nov 8, 2013 13:37:18 GMT -5
s020.radikal.ru/i720/1311/a6/8031e06a73c7.png *Cue gasp of wonder* VHILLS HAS COMMENTED ON MY FIC! HALLELUIAH! \o/ I am so, so happy right now, because your fics are wonderful, and you think my fics are wonderful, and AFDAHGIGEGHAGHHG! Unfortunately, I won't be able to deliver right away (I blame school - if there's work to do, I have to focus on that first, and I have a Calculus test next week! XP). ^^; Thank you so much for your input though, vhills! *Floats away*
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