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Post by Deleted on Feb 26, 2011 14:55:08 GMT -5
Okay I'm going to give you guys a preview of this story. "Afther the escapade with the , Flint is working on a new invention, one that might enable someone to travel between worlds.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 26, 2011 15:00:45 GMT -5
Okay, you ready? Here goes (ive never written a fan fiction before so im kind of nervous :-[c these chapters will be short Chapter 1 It was 2 months after the escapade with the , and Flint was still going as crazy about inventing as ever. Flint: Finally finished! Steve: SCARY Yes, it was, indeed, scary. It was a huge metal behemoth that was enormous. Flint: Okay, Steve, ready to try it out? Steve: Runs into the house. Flint flipped a switch and the thing began to vibrate. The air around it was shimmering. Flint heard a distant yell coming from a shape in the tunnel of air...
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2011 16:06:16 GMT -5
(why no constructive criticism?) Disclaimer: Characters belong to Sony Pictures Animation.
Chapter 2 (in our world now) David was a big fan of Cloudy With A Chance Of Meatballs. He loved the movie so much he made Flint’s lab! Now, it was time to test his first invention! David: Okay, you ready, Aldwyn? Aldwyn (the cat): Meow David is taping this on his computer. David: May I present the world’s first portal device! David unveils his big machine. He flips a switch. David:Whoa He is being sucked into a tunnel of light!
(cwacom world) Flint: What the heck? The tunnel deposits David and his computer onto the ground. Flint: Are you okay? David: Where am I? WHOA THIS CAN’T BE HAPPENING MOVIES AREN’T REAL! Flint? Flint: How do you know my name? David: Everyone knows your name! Look at my computer! David types Cloudy With A Chance of Meatballs into Google Images. David: See, look! You’re just animated! You’re a character created by Sony Pictures Animation! I’ll show you your movie. David clicks to open the movie. David: See, look! Flint sits down as the Columbia Pictures Lady shows up…
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2011 18:37:27 GMT -5
Um, hello? ANYOONE THERE I need comments before I can continue.
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Mar 18, 2011 19:18:14 GMT -5
CONTINUE. PLEASE i wanna know what happens nexxxxxxxxxxxxt
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Post by Remorse on Mar 25, 2011 17:09:25 GMT -5
CONTINUE, CONTINUE
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Post by water42 on Apr 6, 2011 9:07:27 GMT -5
I read this a while ago and you still havn't writen anything new.... KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Gemstone108 on Apr 9, 2011 6:15:40 GMT -5
CONTINUE!!!!!!!! i wanna see what happens when Flint finds out he's animated!!!!!!
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Post by flintssister5 on Apr 9, 2011 8:23:06 GMT -5
ME TOO!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2011 12:53:57 GMT -5
Sorry! I'll try to get a chapter up on Monday! I haven't had that much time.
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Post by flintssister5 on Apr 9, 2011 15:23:53 GMT -5
Ok!!!
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Post by water42 on Apr 10, 2011 0:52:06 GMT -5
Yay.... I'm going to fall out of my chair....
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2011 19:04:30 GMT -5
Chapter 3. Flint: *stuttering* b..b..but David: It's insane! I KNOW! IM GETTING FREAKED OUT TOO! David: wait, my laptop David logs on to flintlockwoodslab.proboards.com and signs in as loverofcwacom and goes to the c-box. Ace: hi loverofcwacom GG: hi! How are you? (author note; is using you guys) loverofcwacom: um.. im okay fl123: what are you doing loverofcwacom: guys, I need your help I was inventing a portal in my backyard and got sucked into the world of CWACOM Ace: get on with u loverofcwacom: no, really im here with Flint Lockwood GG: Okay if it's really Flint Flint. what's your middle name loverofcwacom: he says James GG: umm... oh... loverofcwacom: you guys have got to help me! Fl123: But how... To be continued... (thanks gem for criticism!)
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Post by Gemstone108 on Apr 11, 2011 19:10:30 GMT -5
ur welcome!!!! this is pretty good!!! its so funny when people break the fourth wall.
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Post by flintssister5 on Apr 11, 2011 19:10:55 GMT -5
(WHERE AM I? .......DARN CAPS-LOCK IS ON!!! *turns it off* There. I like it. Pretty interesting. )
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