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Post by breezyrulez on May 3, 2010 15:49:53 GMT -5
A huge thanks to KJ for letting me post it Chapter 1 Flint is thoroughly working on his new invention in his lab... an invention that might become his Worst mistake... "Welcome, Flint."
Flint: *Turns around in his chair to see Sam pulling back the shower curtain*
Sam: Flint?
Flint: Hey Sam, I'm over here! *turns back around*
Sam: *approaches Flint* Hey, what'cha working on?
Flint: Well, it's sort of a secret to Steve, but.... *turns aroud in his chair & beckons Sam to get closer* (In a whisper) I'm working on a machine that will turn an ordinary animal into an ~*EXTRAORDINARY*~ animal!
Sam: *pause* ........ What do you... mean?
Flint: This machine I'm working is going to make even the dumbest animal have the mind of a human, so it will be really smart! If I could simply get the smarts of the human brain to get into the animal's brain.... (Trails off)
Sam: Ah, Flint, you shouldn't test things on animals... in my opinion, it's tottaly inhumane-
Flint: *chuckles* Sam, don't worry, I'll make sure it's safe. Besides, theu used to test things on animals ALL the time. Some people still do. Now, if I could just figure out what animal to use....
*both Flint and Sam pause and look at Steve*
Steve: .........No......! *runs*
Flint: Okayy... if Steve won't do it, then.... *pauses, then grins and looks up at Sam* ...... A DOG!
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What do you think? Next chapter to be posted very soon.
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Post by klops on May 3, 2010 16:05:47 GMT -5
Well, I look forward to the continuation
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Post by Ice and Rody on May 3, 2010 18:13:01 GMT -5
I do too!
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Post by philintphan on May 3, 2010 19:36:50 GMT -5
Is this the one where Flint accidently gets turned into a dog? I haven't read it but I've seen pictures of it.
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Post by breezyrulez on May 3, 2010 20:04:08 GMT -5
Philint - No, but it's related to that. That's KJ's story... and since mine is similar, I asked her if I could post it and she said it was ok. Chapter 2: The next day, Sam - THAT'S the dog you got?
Both Sam and Flint are staring at a huge, crazy, snarling, out-of-control, barking dog in a large, shaking cage.
Flint: Yep. Wonderful, isn't he? His name's Kiba. The worker at the shelter said that he actually had more wolf in his bloodlines than dog. She said that nobody would take him, so she gave him to me for free!
Sam: But why did you have to get the one that was so.... scary?
Flint: Well, the more agressive the dog, the more it can save people from danger. The harder it can fight. Think, Sam, killers, robbers, criminals.... all would be run out by THIS dog! That is.. once I get the tests working.
*Kiba goes crazy in his cage, snarling, barking, and jumping all with a foaming mouth*
Sam: Poor little guy.... *whistles softly*
*The beast stops snarling, looks at sam, smiles, and starts panting and wagging his tail*
Flint: Hey, I think he likes you!
*Dog continues to be happy*
Sam: I do too!
*both pause and watch the dog*
Flint: *puts on a devious grin and chuckles* Watch this.... *Flint waves his hand in front of Sam's face*
*Kiba's gaze flicks from Sam to Flint and he starts to go mad again*
Flint: *Stops waving*
*Kiba looks at Sam again and acts happy*
Flint: Hehe, I know what'll really freak him out.... *Flint turns Sam around and kisses her- both of them watching the dog's reaction*
*The beast barks and snarls uncontrollably, shaking the cage madly*
Sam: You are so mean! *gives Flint a light, teasing push*
*Flint Laughs and looks at Kiba, who is still going crazy*
Flint: Hey, hey, Kiba, calm down... it was only a kiss... *reaches hand towards cage*
*Kiba snarls and bites Flint's finger*
Flint: *Gives agonized scream* Oh... GOD!!! AGGHHHH! *falls on knees; clutching his right hand*
Sam: Flint! Oh my God... *rushes down to him* Are you okay?!
Flint: Ah, yeah... I'll be... fine.... Uggghhhhh.... *grunts*
Sam: C'mon, we should go get that cleaned up.....
*Both leave the beast, whose gaze is trailing after them...Next chapter will be up soon.
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Post by mrsflintlockwood on May 3, 2010 20:34:12 GMT -5
Very amazingness! Keep posting, or post the rest so I dont gotta wait lol! Im currectly working on my "novel" as well
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Post by klops on May 4, 2010 11:16:02 GMT -5
It's very intresting story, i love dogs I look forward to the continuation again Haha Flint is crazy
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Post by LabCoatLem on May 4, 2010 13:03:48 GMT -5
Wow, Kiba sure is a crazy canine. Awh, I like the fact he's all happy and calm with Sam though! Maybe he had some bad times involving male humans when he was a puppy. Anyway, looking forward to reading more
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Post by breezyrulez on May 4, 2010 17:37:59 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone for the comments. Yes, Kiba is completely insane. xD Okay, Chapter 3. This is where things get crazy, so hang on for the ride... ;D (BTW, his dad isn't in this.... I didn't really know what to do with Tim and Brent and Earl and everyone else.... xD) After Sam helped Flint with his small wound, Flint sent her home with a little hug and went back into his house, for it was getting late, and it was almost time for him to go to bed. About 20 minutes after Sam left, Flint was in his kitchen, thinking of how he should create his new 'mind-transfer machine'.
"Ugh, why do I have to get stuck like this? I found the dog I needed..." Flint questioned himself. "But how am I going to get Kiba to be as smart as a huma---AGHH!"
Flint suddenly felt an extremely sharp pain in his right hand. He looked down at his right hand, clutching it tightly and wincing.
His eyes grew round and his mouth gaped open when he saw the bitemark glowing PURPLE.
"HHHHHH! OHHHHHHHH MYYYYYY..............." He gasped, and sprinted upstairs to his room.
Flint slammed the door shut, and backed against the wall, grimacing as his hand shook.
He stared down at his hand with gritted teeth and eyebrows curved downward... attempting to bear the pain. He grabbed his right wrist with his left hand; trying to keep it from shaking, but as soon as he did so the pain got worse and he screamed. He paced back and forth, still grunting and trying to keep control of his hand.
Flint froze.... now his mouth started to feel different. He went into a small panic... backing up slowly for no reason.
"Ahhhhhhh.... OH NOOOO....!" he started to say under his breath. He opened his mouth wide, squinting his eyes shut as his teeth got extremely sharp, and his canine teeth became so large that when he closed his mouth, they hung out.
He snapped his eyes open to feel his feet shrinking - the size of his spray on shoes shrunk with them. His ears started to become pointier near the top.
Flint dropped to the ground, shaking violently, breathing heavily and screaming. He began having small seziures, waking up from them, then having more as the purple glow of the bite got brighter.
"aaaaAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" he shouted; starting low and then getting louder near the end. "KIBA!!!!"
The next day,
After nobody answering the doorbell and not finding anybody in Flint's lab, Sam opened his front door and heard rustling in Flint's kitchen.
Sam: "Flint? Are you in here?" She said as she poked her head through the front door.
Flint: "Ah, yeah, Sam, I'll be right there...." Flint answered her, his voice huskier than usual.
*Sam sat on Flint's couch, listening to all of the crashes of what sounds like pots and pans in the kitchen*
Sam: "Flint? Are you okay in there?" *gets up off of the couch and slowly walks to the kitchen* Sam: "Flint, what's going on in here?"
Sam looked at Flint with his hands on the counter, his whole body shaking. His arms looked very hairy.... last time she saw Flint's arms they hardly had any hair on them. His fingernails were longer and sharp - they looked grey instead of clear.
Flint: "Sam.... you have to.... stay away from me..." he croaked with a grunt.
Sam: "Why would I do that?"
Flint: "You just.... agh... just HAVE to okay?"
Sam: "I don't understand.. what's wron----HHHH!" Sam gasped as Flint turned around. His eyes were extremely wide, his face covered in scruffle and his teeth sharp. His ears were pointy and had tiny hairs coming out of them - and they seemed to have gotten higher towards the top of his head than they were the day before. His fingers had gotten shorter and rounder, with grey claws on the ends of them. Flint's nose got smaller, however, it pointed outward more and it was turning black and wet. He had his mouth open, and as he breathed out, his whole body shook. A bite mark on his right hand's finger was glowing bright purple.
Sam: "Ohhh, my God.... what happened to you?!"
Flint: "Please, Sam, stay away from me...." He said in a deep, husky voice, almost unclear.
Sam: "No, you need help.... you could have gotten something from Kiba!" She slowly started to walk towards him.
Flint: "NO!" He snarled and lunged forward, swiping out at Sam and snapping his jaws. (Yes, he still is walking on two legs)
Sam: "AHH!" She screamed, and started to back away quickly, giving another gasp.
Flint walked towards her, holding his right arm that tried to claw at Sam.
Flint: "Sam, I'm sorry... I don't want to.... HURT YOU!!!" He started to bark as he ended his sentence - lunging out at Sam once again.
Sam gave another scream and dodged Flint's attack.
Flint: "AGGGHH!!!" he ran into his kitchen and came back with something in his mouth. He violently threw it near Sam.
Sam picked up the pan, breathing rapidly. "Wha?!"
Flint growled something that sounded like - "HIT ME" as he quickely walked toward her.
Sam: "No... I.... can't do that to you!" She said as she walked backwards.
Flint was almost to her now. "HITT MEE.... NOWW!" He snarled as he began to run towards her with an open mouth.
Sam screamed and hit Flint in the face as hard as she could with the pan.
Flint fell backwards - knocked out cold.
Sam immediatley called 911.
"What happened to you...?" She breathed as she waited for someone to pick up.
Oh, snap. xD Jk, jk. Next part will be posted soon. OHH! and by the way, if ANYBODY wants to draw this, please do! I would love to see it! Just be sure that you say the story behind it was mine.
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Post by flintssister5 on May 4, 2010 17:53:08 GMT -5
OMG!!!!! FLINT'S A WEREWOLF!!!!!!(pretty cool)
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Post by breezyrulez on May 4, 2010 18:45:56 GMT -5
Rofl, yes, indeed xD thanks! ;D
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Post by Yellow Dragon on May 4, 2010 19:14:47 GMT -5
Oh, Breezy! I really like it. I like werewolf stories very much! And maybe, if I could find time for it I will make some art of your story.
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Post by breezyrulez on May 4, 2010 20:19:35 GMT -5
YD - I'm so glad you like it! If you do some artwork I would love to see it!
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Post by KJ on May 4, 2010 21:19:16 GMT -5
This is real good, you just can't go wrong with werewolf stories And you're welcome breezyrulez:)
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Post by vhills on May 5, 2010 0:55:08 GMT -5
D8?! flint's a werewolf??! and sam knocked him out with a pan or something?! awesome! not that i like flint being knocked out, but the story still is. x)
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