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Post by ral365 on Apr 29, 2010 16:04:50 GMT -5
@breezyrulez Lol, it's ok, that makes sense. Well, I'd wait until a doctor or mental expert says your an Aspie before you assume you are one. BTW, I LOVE your banner!
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Post by breezyrulez on Apr 29, 2010 17:19:24 GMT -5
Yeah, I suppose. Thank you!
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Post by KJ on Apr 29, 2010 19:40:52 GMT -5
KJ"You lie this version better?" What was there to lie about? lol, Just kidding! Thanks a lot, Kim! I'm just curious, what did you like about this version that made it better than the old one? A couple of people have actually said that they like the old one better. This one is more likable cause the original one when Flint turned himself normal, he was acting like a jerk and plain to leave Chewandswallow, It was hard for me to like him after that. But this version is much better, true he was a little bit of a jerk but not as much and you can still felt what he's going through.
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Post by ral365 on Apr 29, 2010 19:55:59 GMT -5
KJ"You lie this version better?" What was there to lie about? lol, Just kidding! Thanks a lot, Kim! I'm just curious, what did you like about this version that made it better than the old one? A couple of people have actually said that they like the old one better. This one is more likable cause the original one when Flint turned himself normal, he was acting like a jerk and plain to leave Chewandswallow, It was hard for me to like him after that. But this version is much better, true he was a little bit of a jerk but not as much and you can still felt what he's going through. That was pretty helpful, Kim. I really appreciate your constructive criticism, instead of some people just saying "Love it" or "Cool." I admit I felt like I made Flint too 1-dimensional in the original. I like the new one better because there's just more meaning to everything; more to the characters, more deep conflict, more meaning to the plot, etc. I'm really glad you enjoyed my work. I'm looking forward to see more of yours!
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Post by klops on Apr 30, 2010 6:20:47 GMT -5
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Post by Ice and Rody on Apr 30, 2010 17:04:08 GMT -5
(For chapter 1) Wow...I really like it!!!!! (For chapter 2) .....OMG OMG!!! I...I think I have asburger....*GASP* I have plenty of thoses symptems!! But.....that may be why I'm so talented at reading and art. Hm! I don't know. (Chapter 3) I CAN'T STOP READING!!!! (Chapter 4) I think you need to make a book...THEN SEND ME A COPY!! (Chapter 5) I am going to copy all of your story and save it. Then it will be in my documents and I can read it any time I want. (Chapter 6) HAPPY ENDING!!!!LOLS!! I'm SO reading this again!!!
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Post by ral365 on Apr 30, 2010 17:09:14 GMT -5
@iceandrodytheratbird lol, Thank you so much! I'm glad you really liked it. I'd prefer you not copy or redistribute my work, though. I have strict copyright rules, and would much rather keep my work on the forum. And you may not wanna assume you have Asperger's until you've been diagnosed by a professional. I was diagnosed with Asperger's when I was 8.
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Post by Ice and Rody on May 1, 2010 10:25:42 GMT -5
I know, i'm kidding! Anyways, I LOVE YOUR STORY!! IT'S PROBOBLY ONE OF THE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!
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Post by flintlover1995 on May 1, 2010 12:22:21 GMT -5
i love your sad story too, ral365 it is awesome for me
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Post by ral365 on May 8, 2010 7:38:10 GMT -5
@iceandrodytheratbird Aww, thanks! I'm so glad so many people like my fic. Same with you, flintlover1995.
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Post by hellavet on May 17, 2010 14:53:05 GMT -5
BEAUTIFUL ;____; <33333 Don't ever stop writing!
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Post by ral365 on May 18, 2010 0:40:55 GMT -5
hellavetThank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and that you were able to take the time to read it. What did you like best about the fic? Is there anything you think I could improve on?
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Post by hellavet on May 18, 2010 1:11:30 GMT -5
Oh wow which part did I like best!!? Hmmmm that's a hard question.. When Tim holds his butt xD And I actually liked every moment that the other characters were very understanding and loving to Flint and when they would come to his rescue (I like hurt/comfort stories). Hmm something to improve on? More FlintxSam fluff~ xDD nah just kidding that's not very good critique. I really enjoyed it and I wouldn't change anything about it Just keep writing because you know what you're doing is AWESOME
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Post by ral365 on May 18, 2010 17:42:06 GMT -5
hellavetAww, thank you so much! I do too! I think since Flint was the hero of the original story, it might be interesting if HE was the one in trouble this time. And in retrospect, I don't mind the "Ass Burgers" joke as long as people don't use it to make fun of me again. You think you could leave a little critique for "Convention Suspension?"
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Post by Jillian51894 on Jun 4, 2010 10:57:56 GMT -5
Excellent excellent story! Its beautiful and has a great storyline! Bravo!
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