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Post by Remorse on Jul 16, 2012 15:18:26 GMT -5
YAY, I've come back from the land of disappearance!
ROBOOOTTTSSS!!!!
WE'RE SAAVEED WAY TO GO!
The RedWillow Tree...hmm...
BUT WE'RE SAVED!! ...YAY!
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Post by GeekyGirl on Jul 17, 2012 3:04:41 GMT -5
The Robots~ ... they work So my not-so-secret dark side now has a chance to awaken! [shadow=black,left,300]NOBODY SHALL BE IN THE WAY NOW! I'VE GOT MY TECHNOLOGICAL BEINGS OF EPICNESS~! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! [/shadow] Despite the fact that I've been watching too much anime, me and my robotic empress of a self cannot wait for the next chappie of this. X)
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 19, 2012 17:13:26 GMT -5
OK GG YOU ASKED FOR THIS! MWAHAHAHA!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
Ch. 46: NOT AGAIN!
PAUSE THAT STORY FOR A MOMENT! It's strange how all of this formed. And the robots actually worked?
Breezy: CAN WE CONTINUE OUR STORY NOW?
But come on! PEOPLE NEED TO KNOW THIS!
Ace: CAN'T.....WAIT....
FINE! I'll continue the story! SHEESH!
The robots destroyed the cages! Members ran off in fear yet with happiness!
"WHERE DO THEY THINK THEY'RE GOING!?" The Man asked with an angry smile. Soldiers pointed their guns. Then the robots pointed THEIR cannons at them! The Man yelped, "Meep..."
"IT'S OVER!" CTM came. "Let us AND the other people that aren't members go!"
"What are you?" Asked The Man. "Moses?! HA!" Everyone stared at him. "You've got a beautiful camp here! No one will make fun of you-" Jell-O blinked. "-No one will ignore you-" Flint sighed. "-No one will make you feel alone-" Argion made a face. "-And no one will bully you-" Breezy lost her anger. "You all have something in common! Why go back to the world that hated you instead of not being here? Surrounded by people who know your problems!?"
MFL thought for a moment. She then said, "He's right..."
Breezy's eyes widened.
"This world doesnt accept us..." MFL said. "Isn't it about time we did something about it?"
Jell-O didn't like this one bit. "Even IF you wanted to change the world, things always goes to its worst when someone tries."
"The Holocaust happened..." Flint said. " Yet a few people are still racist..."
"People forget how great someone was..." Ral said, looking at her Walt Disney locket.
The Man gave a greedy smile.
MFL thought. "Then we'll have to do something that'll stick to their brains forever!"
"That never works..." Remorse said. "Well...people DO remember...but they don't care..."
Jell-O then said. "Not even for Nature..."
Water and Steve nodded.
Suddenly, someone yelped in pain. Everyone looked. Bubblez was the one who yelped. Then she fell asleep! Then another person. Then another one!
"FIRE!" The Man yelled. Soldiers started shooting at them. Anyone who got hit fell asleep!
"RUN!" CTM pulled MFL, Breezy, Ace, LCL, Flint, Jell-O, Water, Steve, and Fs5 into the woods.
They kept running until the sound of guns shooting faded. Then, they came apon a cliff with two large metal poles with cut rope.......
......The Bridge.....
"NO MANCHES!" Jell-O yelled. ," YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING!"
"You KNOW this place?!" CTM asked.
"ARE YOU KIDDING!" Flint said. "THIS IS THE BRIDGE! Or what's left of it..."
"WE NEARLY DIED IN THAT THING!" Breezy said.
"Correction!" Flint said. "There's a river below-"
"THEN WE JUMP!" Ace said. "OFF YA GO!"
She kicked Flint down the cliff!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
"JOSEPH!" Jell-O then was pushed!
"UNBELIEVABLE!" Ace said. "They've been here anyways!" She jumped in! Everyone else followed.
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Post by Remorse on Jul 20, 2012 13:23:47 GMT -5
Woah...I got really tense when I read this...KEEP GOING! O.O
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 23, 2012 17:46:46 GMT -5
If only Ace cold read this story.....
Ch. 47: Try to forgive...
"CANNON BAL!" Jell-O yelled.
SPLASH!
"INCOMING!" Ace yelled.
SPLASH!
"GERONIMO!" Water hit the water (hmmmmm).
SPLASH!
Flint fell. "OH PLEASE NO-"
BELLY FLAP!
"OOOOOH!" Everyone murmured.
Flint burst out of the water with a red face. "HOHOHOHHOHOHOHHOHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! HOW WAS IT THAT I FELL FIRST AND I HIT THE WATER LAST!?"
"You didn't hit me..." Water said.
"OH!" Jell-O came to him and took him out of the water. She covered him with a blanket and kissed him gentely on his cheek.
"Thank you..." Flint said, shivering.
Breezy came out shivering and saw MFL. "YOU!" MFL gasped. Breezy was about to clobber MFL when LCL came in between them.
"ENOUGH!" She yelled.
"YOU'RE DEAD FOR BETRAYING US!" Ace yelled.
"LISTEN TO HER!" CTM yelled.
Breezy made a face. "SHE MADE ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL IN FRONT OF RACHEL!"
"SHE MADE MY FOOT BLEED!" Flint yelled.
"SHE ELECTRIFIED ME!" Water yelled.
"She made me get bitten by a snake..." Jell-O calmly said with a scared tone.
Fs5 said, "She made Vhills sick and passed it to Breezy!"
"IT'S NOT MY FAULT I WAS BRAIN WASHED!" MFL yelled. "BESIDES, The Man is kinda correct about the world. I prefer to stay."
Flint thought something but kept it a secret.
"I f I were brain washed..." Steve said. "I wouldn't know. So I forgive you."
"Same here..." Water said with a wide grin that creeped the heck out of Jell-O.
Flint sighed. "Okay.....I was the one who you treated badly first...but I'll forgive just this once!"
MFL exhaled happily. "Thank you..." She looked at Ace and Breezy. "Please...I beg for your forgiveness.
Breezy was about to speak when there was an explosion.....followed by a maniacal laugh.
"GG?!" Flint yelled.
"IT'S ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE!!!!!!!!" GG yelled in the distance. The robots were shooting cannons at some tanks.
"KEEP FIRING!" Yelled The Man.
Everyone went wide eyed when they saw Remorse driving a small sail bout with wheels. IT LOOKED LIKE THE BLACK PEARL!
"MWAHAHAHAW!!!!!!!!!!!!" Remorse yelled.
"FINALLY!" Water yelled. "SOME ACTION TIME!"
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 23, 2012 20:40:37 GMT -5
PLEASE POST! THE STORY'S ALMOST OVER!!!!!!!!!
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Post by vhills on Jul 24, 2012 10:40:57 GMT -5
i agree, ace would be delighted. i laughed out loud when i read that part with ace kicking flint over the edge! (not that i like flint being kicked over edges! but that was just ace for you! xD)
and MFL is there, too! 8)
can't wait to read who's actually alive and what will happen with that black pearl. >D
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Post by flintssister5 on Jul 24, 2012 18:30:08 GMT -5
;D Cool story! So do I get to do anything epic?
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Post by Bubblez12 on Jul 24, 2012 23:08:35 GMT -5
^.^ this is working out great haha
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Post by water42 on Jul 25, 2012 2:01:00 GMT -5
Ahh! XD You got me pined! XP I can't believe it's almost over, seems just like yesterday I was reading your ruff draft at school.
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Post by Remorse on Jul 25, 2012 17:37:39 GMT -5
MY MOMENT HAS ARRIVED!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
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Post by Gemstone108 on Jul 25, 2012 19:53:08 GMT -5
This story has been great so far! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 26, 2012 22:53:31 GMT -5
THIS DOESNT DESERVE A COMMENT!Ch. 48: Oh no... "MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAWWWW!!!!!" Remorse yelled excitedly and angrily. "VENGENCE WILL BE.....AVENGED...... ?" FREEDOOOOOOOOOM!" Fs5 yelled. Everyone who was hit before wasn't affected? "WHY ISN'T IT WORKING!?" The Man yelled. "Maybe they're immune to it?" Stated a soldier. "WHAT ARE YOU!?" The Man yelled, about to slap the soldier. "AN IDIOT!" The soldier flinched. "Very nice..." The Man relaxed. Argion got a giant slingshot and shot an ostritch egg at The Man. "JUST TO BE JOKEY SMURF!" Argion yelled. "KEEP FIRING!" The Man yelled."KEEP FIRING! KILL THEM IF YOU HAVE TO!!!!!" Argion threw a pan with the slingshot. "HAHAHAHAAA!" The Man's face was red. "THAT'S IT! KILL THEM ANYWAYS!" "BOOHOOO!" Rainbow yelled. A cage fell from the sky and trapped Rainbow. "Huh?" MFL murmured. A cage trapped Fs5. "Wait.." Mfl yelled. Another cage caught Gemstone. "UH OH!" MFL said. "MY ROBOTS WILL SAVE US!" GG yelled. "I destroyed them!" The Man said proudly. GG made a face... "Did you see her funny looking face when he told her he destroyed her robots?" Bubblez giggled. Jell-O elbowed her hard. "HEY!" Flint yelled. "I WORKED ON THOSE ROBOTS TOO! DON'T LEAVE ME BEHIND! AND STOP TAKING ALL THE CREDIT FOR YOURSELF!" The Man thought something evil about Flint. "Little boy-" "I'm 15!" Flint mummbled. "-Remember the fact that I can put you with us!" The Man said. Jell-O listened worridly. "I KNOW! JUST...please..." Flint looked away sadly. Jell-O blinked. "NOW ALL OF YOU WILL DIE IF YOU BREAK ANYMORE RULES!" The Man looked at all the captive members and non-members."Take them onto the planes. CTM secretly heard him. "Take them to Oswiecim, Poland AND PUT THEM IN-" Everyone was listening. CTM and MFL listened too. "-Auschwitz!" "WHAT!!!!?" Flint said.
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Post by water42 on Jul 27, 2012 1:21:05 GMT -5
O.O Oh Shizz!
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Post by GeekyGirl on Jul 27, 2012 22:38:24 GMT -5
I think I just died a little on the inside... my- my poor wittle babies~ D: Hate those people. Hate them so much! D:<
Andddd omigoshholycrud O.O just looked up Auschwitz.... gonna have nightmares~ D:
Update Jello, as much as I don't want the story to end, I wanna know we somehow get out of creepy consentration camps! O.O That's like... freaky... like... I seriously hope wiki is a lie on that... like... seriously O.O *shuddering*
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