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Post by Jell-o101 on May 25, 2012 23:54:08 GMT -5
I AM GOING TO WRIT WHAT IVE WRITTEN SO FAR OF THAT DELETED THREAD INTO ONE PARAGRAPH!
(warning: LONGEST RUN-ON SENTENCE)
Ral has a normal life in Florida but gets taken away from the Government and meets Breezy first and along with other Forum Members, they are taken to a Base Camp Head Quarters and realize that bthe Government fear that people like us can reveal their secrets so they arestealing us one by one, so Breezy also realizes that MFL is working for them (but why) then Ral meets Fs5,and Flint so They plan an escape at night but it goes wrong as a camera saw them, so Ral turns on a red jet plane....
Continued next time...
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Post by water42 on May 26, 2012 0:09:56 GMT -5
I'm glad your still going to make this story C:
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2012 17:13:26 GMT -5
Nice run-on sentence. Yes, you gave us a cliffhanger with the chapter last time.
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Post by fldsmdfr232 on May 27, 2012 17:39:22 GMT -5
Can i be in it?
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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2012 4:49:28 GMT -5
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jun 3, 2012 20:37:40 GMT -5
CONTINUEING!!!
The plane could only fit two people soFs5 had to stay behind as Ral turns on the plane and lifts it off the ground and into the sky....they eventually crash and find me lost and in tears so they help me find Water, Steve, Rainbow and Argion the next day but we find them in a foggy place lost in the middle of a long almost-about-to-break bridge.....it breaks because the government found them and we fall into a river and meet Remorse on a stolen mini pirate ship and we all get a ride all soaking wet (Ral has a night mare of a horse running in fear, a drop of water breaks glass, and a Black Mamba strikes)yet later that night we fall over a water fall and meet a very sick Vhills who attempted to escape too with Fishy, Ace, and Yoshi yet we all get caught and Ral escapes with Remorse, but they still wanna help us escape so they come back and see that Breezy got sick by Vhills, Flint got his foot cut by broken glass, Water gets electrifyed, and I get bitten by a snake...we were all victoms of MFL; GG secretly tells The Admins that MFL's been brainwashed by the Government and now want to SECRETLY escape and then find out that Phil Lord and Chris Miller are the "slaves" of The Man and tell everyone....but The Government put Ral, Breezy, me, Flint, Argion, Fs5, Fishy, Ace, YoshiGuy, Bubbles, and a few others (and The Admins) into a gas chamber of Heliem....we survive and are taken to the hospital (remember that Vhills got better and she and GG are planning something BIG!).
EVERYONE CAUGHT UP NOW? *smiles really big*
I"LL NOW CONTINUE THA STORY......Oh...and Ral shouldnt be the main character.....this story seems now that it doesnt need a main character...hehe...sorry Ral...
Ch. 40: THAT'S IT!
With The Admins saying that everyone is to fight The Government with what Vhills and GG have built, everyone is now considered a Thinker. Anyone who is to be the opposite of a Thinker's personality are called Non-Thinkers. The Government was obviously the Non-Thinkers.
"Question!" Flint asked GG. "What exactly IS the 'secret' weapon we are to use against The Non-Thinkers?"
GG giggled. Then she got close to him, made a dangerously serious look, and said with a devilish voice," IT'S A SURPRIZE FOR EVERYONE!"
Jell-O's eye twitched. "OK!" She pulled Flint away.
CTM looked under the covers of the HUGE thing that Vhills and GG made. She knew it was a machine of some sort...but what exactly is it?
"Nonononono!" Vhills said. She slapped CTM's hand. "NO TOUCHY!"
"Curiousity killed a cat!" GG added.
Oswalt gulped. "Then, these machines will...*gulp*...kill?"
Vhills and GG looked at each other with wide eyes. "Uh........"
Oswalt fainted.
"Okay! Time out!" Gloria said. "They are 'THE GOVERNMENT!' We're talking about tanks and battleships and atomic bombs! What do we got?"
"A......." Vhills and GG uncovered the machine. ".....A HUGE ROBOT!" The huge robot was 13 feet tall. Its design reminded everyone of a huge bot from Terminator or Transformers.
"It can shoot missles that detect heat!" GG stated.
"And it's water proof!" Vhills said. "It can turn into any thing you need for a HUGE battle! For example-"
GG brought out a list. "Tank, small battleship, cannon-" Flint stared at its design and fainted. "-jet plane, and if we get hungry, an Ice cream machine!"
"THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!" Water yelled. "CAN IT MAKE POPTARTS!?"
"Uh...." Vhills answered. "It can make ice cream and gummy bears..."
"HA!" Steve yelled. "IN YAH FACE!"
Vhills smiled when Flint came. "Another question- HOW ON EARTH DID YOU BUILD THIS? I MEAN I HAVE HAD SOME BUILDING EXPERIENCE BUT SOMETHING THIS ADVANCED!? I feel hopeless..."
Jell-O hugged Flint. "Oh, Joseph...don't feel bad. I bet you can LEARN to build something like this!"
Flint moaned. "You said it......IF I learn to do it....which I never have the time to do since I'm always stuck at home doing WORK!"
"Except...we're not home..." Argion said.
Flint suddenly lit up.
GG looked at him. "With a mind like yours, we need all the help we can get! There's always room for one more! We need an extra hand here!"
"You see..." Vhills added. "We need 9 more robots. Care to help-"
"OH YEAH!" Flint swiftly ran to the robot. He had a huge smile on his face.
Jell-O giggled. "Good luck, Guys!"
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Post by Flintlock3r on Jun 3, 2012 22:15:28 GMT -5
*flexes hands* lemme work my magggiiiccccc!!! XD
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Post by vhills on Jun 4, 2012 9:40:12 GMT -5
we'll work OVERTIME. no sleepy, no coffeebreaky! NO PEEKY NO TOUCHY. xD
i'm glad you're keeping up with the story, you're doing a very good job. and i'm not saying this only because you make me build awesome robots. ROBOTS WITH ICE CREAM AND GUMMY BEAR FUNCTION.
i could start roleplaying this thing just now. x3
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Post by flintssister5 on Jun 5, 2012 16:31:53 GMT -5
;D Cool story, Jello! I can't wait to see the next part!
Does my character do anything cool to help?
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Post by fishy16 on Jun 7, 2012 13:04:32 GMT -5
Wow nice job Jello!!! Robots with Ice cream and Gummy Bears.......now i want one...hhaha lol You make the coolest ideas!! ;D
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Post by flintbby147 on Jun 7, 2012 19:10:33 GMT -5
i really like your story so far jello sorry the rest got deleted and all
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Post by water42 on Jun 8, 2012 1:40:45 GMT -5
Yays! It continues! ^U^
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jun 9, 2012 1:09:30 GMT -5
VHILLS! IMMA USE WHAT YA PUT IN THAT POST OF YOURS! XPCh. 41: WE NEED SLEEP! Vhills was doing the job of keeping GG and Flint awake. " NO SLEEPING ON THE JOB! NOT EVEN A COFFEE BREAK!" "Aye aye, Vhills!" GG yelled with her right hand apon her forehead. "AYE AYE SIR! I MEAN MA'AM!" Flint said. He shamefully went to his set of tools and started helping GG- "Oops..." GG mummbled. Flint stared at the red mist everywhere. "Does this normally happen?" He asked. Vhills, coughing, answered " Yeah.....I hope nothing bad happens again-" "WHAT THE HELL?!" Flint yelled. "You get used to it..." GG murmured. CTM was sound asleep when- CTM covered her head with her penguin pillow. Breezy was in a deep sleep when- "WOULD YOU KEEP IT DOWN I'M TRYING TO SLEEP!" Breezy angrily yelled. Jell-O was mummbling in her sleep when- Jell-O got up wide eyed. She looked out the window and saw the blue mist. "The faeries have come for me....." She murmured. The she plopped back to sleep. Flint came out of the mist coughing. "THIS IS TIRING!" "How do you think we feel?" CTM, an angry Breezy, and a sleepy Jell-O were there. "I'm sorry." Vhills said. "We're having technical difficulties with the robots!" "Will it be like this with the OTHER bots?" Jell-O asked, her Oswald doll held by one hand and her other rubbing her eye. GG came out coughing."IT SMELLS LIKE WET HAMSTER!" Breezy frowned. "I'm going to bed- WHA?!" Jell-O was asleep on the ground hugging her leg. Flint snickered a bit. Breezy frowned even more. "Jell-O , sweetie.... GET OFF MY FOOT!" Jell-O woke up with a half snort have word: "WHAT?" Flint came to her. "Go to bed. You're too sleepy." Breezy snickered. "That somewhat sounded a little wrong..." Vhills marched to Flint and pulled him away from Jell-O from his red jacket. "I SAID NO BREAK!" "Uh, no. You said no COFFEE break. "GG said. "JUST COME ON!" Vhills was serious. She wanted to go home. She pulled Flint away from Jell-O. Jell-O looked at Flint with an almost sad face. Flint had a total sad face. As he went inside the building and the doors closing, Jell-O sighed and walked away.
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Post by flintssister5 on Jun 9, 2012 18:13:00 GMT -5
XDD What's with all the explosions??? Wouldn't that alert the government, or someone else?
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Post by vhills on Jun 10, 2012 4:45:50 GMT -5
that is FUN. i can so picture this. x) i'm sure we could do it all more quietly if we had more time?
WAIT WHY AM I POSTING HERE, NO BREAK FOR VHILLS. D<
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