Post by obsessedwithflint on Jul 19, 2011 20:05:53 GMT -5
Hey. I wrote a story, and here it is. xD I'm kind of a beginner at this, so it won't be as good as Ral's or Jello's, but hey I like writing stories, and this beginning won't be as long as the next posts because I want to see if you like it. Also, the beginning is rather...boring so hang in there. :P
I sometimes talk to this girl, but I got that name (Jaunea) from PepprmintWinter on twitter. She's nice, I talked to her on my old account... and you guys probably don't care. I like that name and okay... just read the story. xD
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Jaunea watched the snow fall down from her window. She had always done this when it snowed, even if she had to finish school work, she always stared at the snow. She hoped that she would wake up one day, and ice cream snow would be there, just like in her favourite movie Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs. The child adored that movie. She also loved the book; her mother used to read it to her every night, but sadly that ended because of her death.
Jaunea swallowed hard thinking about her mother. Oh how she missed her. If only she could fly back in time, and talk to her again; just one more time! Jaunea snapped herself out of that thought.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door, and Jaunea jumped with excitement.
“Dad!” she exclaimed and ran to the door.
Her father had been working late to help with a new project at work. He worked at a bakery called Wuollet Bakery found in St. Paul, Minnesota. He’d been working there every since Jaunea was born which was twelve years ago.
Jaunea unlocked the door and embraced her father.
“Geez, Jaunea! I have never seen you THIS happy to see me.” he said wrapping his arms around her.
She couldn’t stop smiling. Was it the fact that it was snowing that made her so happy? Or was it that she loved her father so much? Maybe it was that she missed her mother, and just needed a big hug from her father? In fact, Jaunea wasn’t so sure why she was in a good mood. It’s better than being in a bad mood, she thought.
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TO BE CONTINUED IF PEOPLE LIKE IT.
I sometimes talk to this girl, but I got that name (Jaunea) from PepprmintWinter on twitter. She's nice, I talked to her on my old account... and you guys probably don't care. I like that name and okay... just read the story. xD
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Jaunea watched the snow fall down from her window. She had always done this when it snowed, even if she had to finish school work, she always stared at the snow. She hoped that she would wake up one day, and ice cream snow would be there, just like in her favourite movie Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs. The child adored that movie. She also loved the book; her mother used to read it to her every night, but sadly that ended because of her death.
Jaunea swallowed hard thinking about her mother. Oh how she missed her. If only she could fly back in time, and talk to her again; just one more time! Jaunea snapped herself out of that thought.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door, and Jaunea jumped with excitement.
“Dad!” she exclaimed and ran to the door.
Her father had been working late to help with a new project at work. He worked at a bakery called Wuollet Bakery found in St. Paul, Minnesota. He’d been working there every since Jaunea was born which was twelve years ago.
Jaunea unlocked the door and embraced her father.
“Geez, Jaunea! I have never seen you THIS happy to see me.” he said wrapping his arms around her.
She couldn’t stop smiling. Was it the fact that it was snowing that made her so happy? Or was it that she loved her father so much? Maybe it was that she missed her mother, and just needed a big hug from her father? In fact, Jaunea wasn’t so sure why she was in a good mood. It’s better than being in a bad mood, she thought.
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TO BE CONTINUED IF PEOPLE LIKE IT.