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Post by hannahlockwood12 on May 29, 2011 20:15:01 GMT -5
poster and prologue first Two wolf packs, both alike in dignity, In fair Alaska, where we lay our scene, From ancient grudge break to new mutiny, Where civil blood makes civil paws unclean. From forth the fatal loins of these two foes A pair of star-crossed lovers take their life; Whose misadventured piteous overthrows Do with their death bury their parents' strife. The fearful passage of their death-marked love, And the continuance of their parents' rage, Which, but their children's end, nought could remove, Is now the two hours' traffic of our stage; The which if you with patient ears attend, What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend.
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on Jun 1, 2011 22:13:04 GMT -5
CHAPTER 1 BROKEN HEART
*It was a cold afternoon in fair Alaska; The geese were flying south, and the bears were out of their dens. Somewhere on the beach, there was a young broken-hearted wolf. His name was Romeo Montague. The sad wolf was sitting on a frozen cliff and looking down at his reflection in the ocean.*
Romeo: *thinking* What's wrong with me? Why did she leave me? Why didn't she love me? *sigh* Oh, Rosaline. Rosaline. Will you ever come back to me? Will I ever find another love?
*Then, another younger wolf is feet away from the cliff, watching the poor Romeo's tear fell in the ocean. He was Romeo's cousin, Benvolio.*
Benvolio: Romeo, do your tears create an ocean of joy or sorrow?
Romeo: Sorrow, dear cousin. I have lost the only love I had.
*Benvolio walks up the cliff until he reached his cousin. He lied his paw on Romeo's back as he looked back at Benvolio. He showed him a hidden smile.*
Familiar voice: HEY, ROMEO!!!
*The two wolves looked back at the voice and it was Romeo's best friend, Mercutio. Romeo turned back at his friend. When Mercutio goes to Romeo, he always has a crazy plan that'll eventually get them in a lot of touble.*
Benvolio: Back off, Mercutio. Romeo nor I want to listen to what you have planned for today. Can't you see that Romeo's upset?
Mercutio: Because he loved a girl who didn't love him back, yeah, yeah, yeah.
Benvolio: *builds up his rage* You have no heart about feelings.
Mercutio: Whatever, man. So, Romeo, did you hear about the party on Dante's Cavern?
Romeo: Yeah, it's the Capulet's party of the 100th full moon *pauses then facepalms* Oh, Mercutio. You didn't.
Mercutio: Yes, I did. I got us three invetations to it. C'mon, it'll be great for you to get a girl. Be there before dusk. Oh, and get a disquise. They do not allow Montague's inside. Darn Capulet's.
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Post by water42 on Jun 1, 2011 22:22:29 GMT -5
It's good Hannah, I like it.
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on Jun 12, 2011 11:22:35 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2 PARTY IS SUCH SWEET SORROW
*It is dusk, nearly nightfall. The Capulet, who have shining moon silver fur, are getting the party ready. They are celebrating the 100th full moon of the year. Each year of the full moon, the wolves celebrate it for bringing light into the night sky. Paris, the Prince, and Lord Capulet are sitting just beside each other, watching the party being set up.*
Paris: Lord Capulet, tonight is a very special night.
Lord Capulet: Why's the night so special, Paris?
Paris: Tonight is the night I propose to your daughter, Juliet. Starting tonight, she and I will be happy together...forever.
Lord Capulet: I would want nothing more than to have my Juliet happy. She's been alone since...her mother....
Paris: Yes, so starting tonight, your daughter shall be a queen and I shall be the king.
Lord Capulet: Ok, Paris. *leaves to find Juliet and Paris leaves with a sinister smile. He doesn't care for Juliet. He just wants to be king*
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Post by Bubblez12 on Jun 12, 2011 13:36:21 GMT -5
I Like It
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on Jun 15, 2011 20:39:49 GMT -5
(sorry the other one is short. i accidentally pressed the POST button and I forgot to change it)
PART 2 (i guess)
*The Capulet party had just started at Dante's Cavern, the biggest cavern ever. It was owned by Lord and Lady Capulet, the richest above all wolves. Feet away from the cavern, the Montague boys, Romeo and Benvolio were trying on their disquises. Romeo's was a silver-hooded suit and Benvolio's was a hula stirt and flower necklace*
Benvolio: Mercutio, I am SO going to kill you.
Romeo: Are you sure this is going to work?
Mercutio: Absolutly. They probably won't even know the diffrence.
Benvolio: Yeah. Probably.
Mercutio: Shut up, Benvolio! Romeo, you need to get over this Rosaline obssestion. Now, go inside!
Romeo: *sigh* Alright I'm in.
*Romeo walks into the cavern and a crowd of dancing wolves in front of him blocked his path. He then saw something that caught his eye like a wolf clawed to a caribou's leg. It was the Capulet's daughter, Juliet. He followed her then found himself on the balcony. She was lost from sight*
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Post by Fishy on Jun 16, 2011 11:24:46 GMT -5
Its Awwwwwesome!!! Ur story rocks!!
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on Jun 16, 2011 21:10:22 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3 LOVE AT FIRST HOWL *facepalm for bad pun*
*The poor wolf wasmabout to turn back until something sprang into his ears. It sounded like an angelic howl like he had never heard before. He followed the heavenly sound and found himself in the forest, where the wise ancient wolf, Friar Lawrence lives. He followed the howl as it became louder and louder until he came up to a large bush. He peeked through the leaves and there he saw her, Juliet, the most beautiful wolf he had ever seen. He felt like his heart has stopped from the howl in which he calls the sound of love. He quietly walks from behind the bush then snaps a twig which alerts Juliet*
Juliet: Who's there? *turns around*
*Romeo quickly jumps back behind the bush*
Juliet: Uh, ok. I just saw you jump behind the bush. I have claws. *She shows the small dull claws from her fore toes*
*Romeo felt less terrified, but even more nervous then ever. He walked out from behind the bush and into a beam of light from the trees. Juliet was astonished from what she was seeing.*
Juliet: Who are you?
Romeo: My name is Romeo, m'lady *bows his head*
Juliet: Romeo. Such a nice name. I am... *suddenly inturrupted*
*Juliet's nurse walked into the forest calling out for Juliet*
Juliet's nurse: Juliet! Juliet! Your mother needs you!
Juliet: Oh no, my nurse! She can't see us together!
Romeo: Who's your mother?
Juliet: Lady Capulet! I got to go! *Juliet runs out with Romeo following her*
*Romeo's eyes widen then gasps in shock*
*Juliet waves good bye to Romeo as her nurse whispers in her ear* Juliet's nurse: He's one of the Montague's
*Romeo runs to the Montague village, but stops at a tree to catch his breath*
Romeo: *to himself* She's a Capulet.
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