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Post by hannahlockwood12 on May 20, 2011 20:57:45 GMT -5
i decided before i write the story, i should let out the poster first. here it is Nakita-Rapunzel Rebel-Flynn Rider Akeela-Mother Gothel Audolf (a mouse)-Pascal
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on May 21, 2011 17:07:41 GMT -5
Chapter 1
*The scene takes place in a forest and going pass the trees. We see a WANTED poster on a tree that reads,"WANTED, DEAD OR ALIVE: Rebel, Thief, REWARD: 10,000 gold coins" The camera slowly zooms to the poster as the narrator speaks*
Narrator: This... is the story of how I died...But don't worry. This is actually a very fun story and the truth is it isn't even mine. This is the story of a wolf named Nakita and it starts with the moon. Now, once upon a time, a single tear of moonlight fell from the heavens. And from, this small drop of moon, grew a magic white flower. It had the ability to heal the sick and injured.
*An elderly female wolf came out of the bushes looking at the flower*
Narrator: Oh, you see that old wolf, over there? You might wanna remember her. She's kind of important. Well, centuries passed and hundreds of trees away, there grew a kingdom. The kingdom was ruled by a beloved king and queen and the queen, well, she was about to have a baby and she got sick...REALLY sick. She was running out of time and that's when people started looking for a miracle or, in this case, a magic white flower.
*Cuts to the wolf lady again*
Narrator: Ah, I told you she'd be important. You see, instead of sharing the moon's gift, this wolf, Akeela, hoarded it's healing power to use it to keep herself young for hundreds of years and all she had to do was sing a special song.
Akella: (singing) Flower, gleam and glow Let your power shine Make the clock reverse Bring back what once was mine What once...was mine *turns young*
Narrator: All right you get the chills. She sings to it and she turns young. Creepy, right?
*Royal guards start scattering to search for the flower. Akeela puts a false bush over the flower to blend in with the forest. As she turned her back to leave, her lantern tips the bush over, revealing the flower. One of the royal guards steps over a rock and sees the flower*
Guard: We found it!
*Two guards dig the flower and it's roots out of the earth. Akeela glares at then in the bushes*
Narrator: The magic of the white flower healed the queen. A healthy baby wolf, a princess was born with beautiful albino hair. I'll give you a hint, that's Nakita. To celebrate her birth, the king and queen launched a flying lantern into the sky. And then that moment ended.
*Akella was in front of the bed, where the baby wolf princess was sleeping, and sang the song that makes her young. Nakita's tail starts to glow and Akella grabs a bit of it and cuts it off with a pair of scissors. The white hair turns brown and Akella turns elderly again* Narrator: Akeela broke into royal cavern, stole the wolf pup, and, just like that, gone. The kingdom searched and searched but they could not find the princess. For deep within a hidden tower,
*Nakita as a young pup sang the flower song to Akella, which turns the wolf young*
Narrator: Akella had found her new magic flower. But, this time, she was determined to keep it hidden.
Nakita: Why can't I go outside?
Akella: The outside world is a dangerous place, filled with horrible, selfish wolves. You must stay here, where you're safe. Do you understand, flower?
Nakita: Yes, Mommy.
Narrator: But the walls of that tower could not hide everything. Each year on her birthday, the kingdom would launch thousands of lantern into the sky...in hope that one day...their lost princess...would return.
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Post by Gemstone108 on May 21, 2011 17:43:42 GMT -5
interesting story. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Post by Bubblez12 on May 23, 2011 17:53:05 GMT -5
Cant Wait till the next one this story is awesome
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2011 17:56:13 GMT -5
INteresting story.
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Post by hannahlockwood12 on May 23, 2011 19:32:04 GMT -5
(aww thanx guys for the nice comments anyway here's the second one) CHAPTER 2
*Years later, in the same tower, we see a small, gray mouse, who scurried out the window door and onto the pot holder. He hurried to the two flower pots and hid himself between the them, hoping he wouldn't be seen in the darkness. Then we see 18 year old Nakita, who slammed the two window doors wide open.*
Nakita: Ha! *looks to the flower pots* Hm. Well I guess Audolf's not hiding out here. *walks away*
Audolf: *quietly snickers then something grabs his tail. It was a strain of albino hair. It pulls him up to the window and Nakita pops out from the top of the window.*
Nakita: Gotcha!
Audolf: *squeals in fear
Nakita: That's 22 for me. How about 23 out of 45?
*Audolf gives her a poutting look as the wolf let's him go*
Nakita: Well, ok. What do you want to do?
*The mouse squeals happily then points out to the forest with his tail*
Nakita: Yeah. I don't think so. I like it in here and so do you.
Audolf: *squealingly blows raspberry*
Nakita: Oh, come on, Audolf. It's not so bad in there. *runs back inside and opens another window, letting even more light and starts doing what she normally does. Cleaning, cooking, baking, playing, reading, painting and all over again. She hopes that one day, she'll be allowed to go outside to see the light floating in the sky that are the lanterns that appear only on her birthday.*
*We then see three male wolves who are hopping through the roof of the royal cavern. They are the kingdom's most disasterly theives, Rebel and The Stabbington Brothers, Ruff and Gruff. Rebel looks at the rest of the kingdom from the roof.*
Rebel: Wow! I could get used to a view like this.
Gruff: Rebel, come here!
Rebel: Hold on. *long pause* Yup, I'm used to it. Guys, I want a cavern.
Gruff: We do this job. You can buy your own cavern.*Pulls Rebel back by the scruff of his neck.*
*The theif wolf quietly sneaks behind the table that is holding the royal crown that belonged to the lost princess. It is surrounded by royal guards from the front.*
*One guard sneezes*
Rebel: Ugh. Hay fever?
Guard: Yeah. *long pause* Huh? *turns around only to find the crown gone from the table and Rebel running away with it in his mouth* Hey! Wait!
*The three theives run through the great bridge that leads them to the forest*
Rebel: Can you see me in a cavern of my own? 'Cause I can. All the things we've seen and it's only eight in the morning. Gentlemen, this is a very big day!
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Post by Bubblez12 on May 28, 2011 23:10:15 GMT -5
I LOVE THIS!!!
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