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Post by water42 on May 4, 2011 18:23:56 GMT -5
(Kay, Jello wanted me to put this..... This book has spoilers in it about her books, so if you wanted to read hers I'm Sorry... I'm going to tell you now that there are 17 chapters in this book and they are long!!! So, I hope you like it. )(Oh, BTW Flint and Sam have kids now, it's been 6 years since they last saw Bruce) 1: The Lost Idea It was a sunny morning in Chewandswallow. Flint was still asleep. He rolled over, fell off the bed, and hit his head on his in table. That woke him up and he yelled loudly. He slowly got up and put on his lab coat with a smile. He ran into the kitchen. Sam was making breakfast. Louis and Louise were sitting at the table talking to each other. Flint stood still looking at them. Louis and Louise stopped and looked at Flint. Flint's eyes sparkled and Louis asked "What's up Dad?" Flint smiled and Said "I've got a great idea! I'm going to invent..." He frowned and clenched his fists. Louise gave a concerned look and asked "What's wrong Dad?" He crossed his arms and stared at the floor. Sam placed four plates in front of every chair and looked at Flint. She said "Good morning Flint. What is your idea for a new invention?" Flint looked up at them with confusion in his eyes and said " I can't remember." Sam made a worried face and brought the food to the table. They sat down to eat. Flint put one hand under his chin and picked up his fork and poked at his eggs with the other. He was trying to remember what he wanted to invent. He realized something so terrifying he started to shake. He got up quickly and pushed his chair back making it fall over. He look at Sam and said "Sorry Sam, I'm not hungry." He ran out of the kitchen and into his bedroom. He thought to himself The only time I get inverters block is during one thing. I hope it's not true. He got his cell phone off of his in table and dialed a number. Earl answered the phone at the police station and said "Hello?" Flint walked back and forth while talking. "Hi Earl it's Flint... I have a really important question to ask you. Did Bruce get released from jail?!" Earl raised an eye brow and said "No he didn't Flint, but he did get transferred to another prison a month ago." Flint stopped shaking and Smiled. He said "What prison was he sent to?" Earl answered "I don't know, but it was one in New York." Flint had a relived look in his eyes and said "Thank you Earl, that's great news!" Flint pressed the off button and put the phone down. Then he went back to the kitchen. He sat down in his chair and started to eat. Sam, Louis, and Louise stared at him. Sam said "I thought you weren't hungry and why are you in such a good mood?" Flint smiled and said "I got hungry so I came back." Flint ate a fork full of eggs and looked at Louis and Louise. He swallowed and started talking to Sam. "Louis and Louise's birthdays is coming up soon. Lets go somewhere special." Louis and Louise looked at each other and smiled.
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Post by Gemstone108 on May 4, 2011 18:33:18 GMT -5
awsome!!!!!!!
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Post by water42 on May 4, 2011 18:35:26 GMT -5
Thanks, are you happy I finally put more?
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Post by Deleted on May 4, 2011 19:30:56 GMT -5
Great job!
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Post by Jell-o101 on May 5, 2011 0:44:55 GMT -5
..........HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA FINALLY!!!!!!!!!
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Post by flintssister5 on May 5, 2011 14:25:19 GMT -5
This is pretty good!
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Post by water42 on May 6, 2011 9:01:26 GMT -5
Thanks guys, and remember that there are somethings in this that you won't want to miss! ;D Oh, BTW I might be able to put the next chapter up today!
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Post by Remorse on May 6, 2011 15:51:23 GMT -5
WHOOPEEEEEEE
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Post by water42 on May 11, 2011 16:32:34 GMT -5
(....sorry, that this took so much longer then you all thought it would, I was to busy to write.......) (This is also a time to remember that Flint can not swim) Ch 2: The Gift It was early morning and Flint, Sam, Louis, and Louise where in their car. Flint started the car while Sam made sure they had everything. She looked at Flint and nodded. He drove out of the driveway and they went on their two hour drive. When the car stopped Louis and Louise looked out the window. They saw the big sigh that said Fun Land and saw the roller coasters behind it. They smiled and quickly got out of the car. They stood out of the car and watched each twist and turn of the rides and roller coasters in front of them. Flint and Sam got out of the car. They walked to the ticket booth and bought their tickets. Louis and Louise tried to get Flint and Sam to take them on big rides, but Flint kept saying no. They rode the Swinging Pirate ship and the little kids roller coaster. While on the roller coaster they talked to each other. Louis looked at Louise and said "You know, I thought this would be really fun, but I'm starting to think other wise." Louise looked at him and frowned. "I think your right about that...... Lets try getting them to take us on something bigger." She thought for only a moment and smiled saying "Or.... I can make this one better." Louis raised an eyebrow and said "How are you going to make it better?" Louise smiled and said "Just watch and find out." Louise unbuckled her seat belt and got up, Balancing as she watched the ground as the roller coaster went up and down. She jumped out of the car, luckily landing on her feet. Flint and Sam were busy talking to the ride operator to notice Louise sneak by. Louise opened a big metal box and cut two wires. She twisted them together and loosened a bolt. The ride started to go faster and faster. Louis held on to the rail tightly with one hand and gave a thumbs up with the other. He smiled enjoying the fast winds going through his hair. Louise crossed her arms and smiled very big, proud of her work. Sam and the operator watched the roller coaster following it with their eyes as it got faster. Flint raised an eyebrow and tilted his head. "What are you guys doing?" They pointed their fingers at the roller coaster and Flint turned around. His eyes widened and he yelled " WHAT ARE YOU DOING LOUISE!!?" She paused putting her arms down then quickly said "Nothing..." as she fixed the ride. Louis got off and they both walked up to Flint and Sam. Together they said "If you didn't want us to do that, you should have taken us on something bigger!!" Flint frowned and said "I thought this might be a bad idea, since you can build and change things... Lets just go to Louise's gift." Louis elbowed Louise and she looked at him. He whispered "That was awesome!!" They bought their tickets and went to changing rooms. When they came out Flint and Louis were wearing matching swim trunks and a shirt that said H2O and Sam and Louise were wearing matching swim suits. Louis and Louise happily said "SPLASH LAND!!!" They ran to the closest water slide and got in line and waited. When they got to the front of the line Louise went first, then Louis went, then Sam. Flint was next, he looked nervously at the water then went down the slide. He was screaming like a little girl and got scared when the slide turned and he tried to sit up hitting his head on the pipe. He laid back down and held his head. He was even more surprised when he fell into a pool. He screamed and kicked. Then stood up when he realized the water only went to his waist. He looked at Sam, Louis, and Louise and smiled. Sam slowly shook her head and Louis and Louise laughed loudly. At the end of the day they changed into their normal cloths and got in their car. On the way Louis and Louise fell asleep. Flint smiled at Sam and said "We did a good job Sam." She smiled back and said "They had a great birthday this year. I hope their as happy about it as we are."
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Post by Gemstone108 on May 11, 2011 18:14:17 GMT -5
this was a good chapter!!!
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Post by water42 on May 11, 2011 20:39:52 GMT -5
thank you very much ^^ Hope you like it all!
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on May 12, 2011 19:37:22 GMT -5
fun land is from despicable me, right? i just happened to notice that
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Post by water42 on May 12, 2011 20:28:07 GMT -5
I forgot about that. I don't think it is, I think I started writing this before it came out, this is one of those thing were you start something, then something just like it comes out soon after. I couldn't think of a name, so I called it that...... Good thinking though ^^
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Post by water42 on May 14, 2011 13:15:37 GMT -5
(and finally.......) Ch 3: Bad Shadow It was June 18th. Sam was at work and Louis and Louise were board so Flint packed them lunch and they went to the park. When they got to the park Louis ran to play on the swings and Louise and Steve went and played on the Jungle Jim. Flint set the lunches down by a tree and walked around the park. He was humming his theme song when a long shadow was cast over him. He froze, his hands at his sides. He flinched when hands went over his eyes. Flint's hair stood on end when he heard the voice of the man he feared the most. A light shun off his glasses as Bruce said "Hello Flint." Flint jumped and pushed Bruce away. He took in a deep breath and faced Bruce. Flint said "What are you doing here, leave me and my family alone!!!" Bruce raised an eyebrow "What do you mean by fam..." Flint ring caught his eye. "You got married, and let me guess, to Sam right?" Flint put his hands behind his back and said "Yes, and we have kids now." Bruce's eyes widened "You have kids now!? Um......... I guess a lot does happens in six years. But I am no longer upset by you being with Sam, because I now have a girl friend!!!" Flint raised an eyebrow and said "Right, good for you. One other thing, WHY ARE YOU HERE AND NOT IN JAIL??!" Bruce smiled "I got out early for good behavior so i came to see you and apologize about before. You know, prison changes people. Some in a bad way, and some in a good way, like me. So I'm sorry about before. Anyway how have you been for the last six years?" Flint looked at him and said "I've been pretty good. Sam and I had kids, their names are Louis and Louise. They are twins. " Bruce was surprised "I was right! A lot does happen in six years. Nothing really has changed for me because I've been in prison, but I hope to start my life over with my girl friend." Flint thought for a moment then said "Wait a minute, when did you have time to make a girlfriend? You have been in jail for the last six years." Bruce smiled and said "We have been friends since we were kids. We started dating a month ago when I got out of prison. She was the only one who would come and visit me while i was in prison. My parents wouldn't even come and see me. So I'm happy about her and about getting out of prison." Flint smiled, he wasn't happy for Bruce, he was happy for himself, Sam, and Louis and Louise. This meant Bruce wouldn't to attack them any more. Flint still didn't trust him, but maybe, just maybe, one day he could learn to like him. Even be his friend. Flint closed his eyes for a little over ten seconds thinking to himself. He knew there was no way he could ever be friends with Bruce. Not after what he had done to him and Sam. He was also worried about Bruce lying about having a girlfriend and going after Sam again or him attacking Louis or Louise. Maybe even Bruce trying to do something to him. He could be lying about being better. About being let out of prison. Any of the things he said could well be lies. Flint's eyes widened "How long are you going to stay here?" Bruce said "I don't know yet. I might stay here, or I might go back home. I have to go, I'm going to be late." Bruce quickly left while Flint wondered what he was going to be late for.
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Post by Gemstone108 on May 20, 2011 19:01:46 GMT -5
awsome!!!
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