Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 9:22:51 GMT -5
"AAHH!!!"
A man eating, giant lizard was chasing Flint.
The lizard shot out his long, sticky tongue and caught Flint's leg. Flint tripped and scraped his nails against the living room floor to stop the lizard from eating him.
It wasn't enough. The lizard's tongue gradualy came closer to it's mouth.
"Somebody, HELP!"
Flint cried for help, then thought: This is the end!
His feet touched the lizard's teeth.
This is it!
Flint was in it's mouth now. The mouth was snapping shut.
When the sound of teeth snapping together reached to Flint's ears, all was dark.
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 9:23:08 GMT -5
Yikes! I make very short chapters!
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 9:38:52 GMT -5
I'll go ahead and make the next one...
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 9:49:33 GMT -5
Chapter 2 -----
"Ah!"
Flint woke up with a start. His heart pounded, and he heaved.
He looked around. No monster lizard in sight.
"Some dream.."
He yawned and got out of bed.
(Later that day.)
Sam walked down the sidewalk. Flint caught up.
"Hey Sam!"
"Hi Flint! What's wrong? Your all jumpy."
"It's nothing. Just a dream I had."
"What was it, Flint?"
"Nothing. I was just being chased around my living room by a giant, man-eating lizard."
"Uh..ok then, Flint."
There was a large BANG!! coming from the sky.
Flint and Sam jumped at the noise. They ran down the sidewalk to the main part of town. As they got closer Flint could hear the sound of screaming women and children.
"Agh!"
Flint covered his ears and looked up.
Sam looked stoned.
"F-flint?"
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 9:59:49 GMT -5
Eh, I don't want to lose my ideas! I'll make the next one too!
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 10:09:50 GMT -5
Chapter 3 ------ Sam and Flint were looking up at a U.F.O! There were tiles on the ship that flipped, reveiling a picture of a woman. Atleast, it looked like a woman.
"Greetings." Said the picture.
"We come in peace. We know you may be scared, but we are of no harm. We want to share, to help. My name is Anna."
Anna...Anna....that name sounds familiar!
"We have technoligy that--"
Her voice was cut off and another image appeared on the screen. It was a letter, writen with red ink...or was it blood? It said: "[glow=red,2,300]John May lives[/glow]."
The picture returned to normal and the woman continued to talk.
"--we can help!"
Flint heard another woman calling for something.
"Tyler! Ty? Where are you?"
Tyler? Thats familiar too....
The image continued.
"We are of peace, always."
At that, the tiles flipped again and the image dissapeared.
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 10:11:46 GMT -5
*Smiles* I wanna make the next one too!! I've got lots of ideas!
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 10:23:27 GMT -5
Chapter 4 ------------ Everyone around Flint murmered to themselves. Someone even said out loud: "We should go to America! There we can see Father Jack!"
Yells of agreement followed.
Flint looked at Sam. She still looked stoned but she was nodding, like she agreed.
"Sam? Who's Father Jack?"
Someone in the crowd yelled back at Flint.
"You don't know who Father Jack is?"
"No sir."
"Then you don't know nothin'! Father Jack is the famous priest!"
Wait...Jack? Why are all these names so familiar?
Flint grabbed Sam's arm.
"Come on, Sam. I need to see if Dad's alright."
"Um Flint, is it alright if I stay here?"
"OK then Sam. See ya later."
Flint ran back home and opened the door.
"Dad, are you alright?"
Flint looked around the house, but found nothing.
"He must be at the Tackle Shop."
He ran as fast as he could. When he reached the tackle shop he looked inside. Nothing. He tried to open the door, but it was locked.
He's sopposed to be working today!
Flint ran around the hole island all day looking for him.
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 10:28:16 GMT -5
Chapter 5 ------ Flint sighed and walked back to Sam. He was dissapionted and his legs ached.
He weaved through the crowd and caught up to Sam.
"Did you find him?"
"No.."
"Maybe he went to America."
"He would have told me first."
"Oh...Um Flint, I've been thinking. I think i'm ganna go to America!"
Flint looked at her.
"Why?"
"Well...i've always wanted to meet Father Jack."
"You can't go alone! And...I'll be lonely without you here.."
"Flint, will you come with me?"
"Me?"
"Yeah!"
"OK i'll go!"
|
|
|
Post by vhills on May 19, 2010 11:23:51 GMT -5
you could take all of these tiny chapters and put it into one, you know? x) i don't know v, thus i'm a little confused of the storyline, but i'm looking forward to see what'll happen next~. ;]
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 13:54:42 GMT -5
I know I could Vhills, but i prefur to do little chapters and THANK YOU!
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 19, 2010 14:09:45 GMT -5
Chapter 6 -------------
|
|
|
Post by Ice and Rody on May 24, 2010 14:49:38 GMT -5
Nice, Echo! But don't you remeber? The John May lives sign was in the middle of the series, not the begginning.
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 26, 2010 15:44:07 GMT -5
I know! I know!
|
|
Echosong
Ratbird
Song of the echos.
Posts: 61
|
Post by Echosong on May 26, 2010 15:48:00 GMT -5
I didn't have any other ideas!
|
|