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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Aug 3, 2011 0:31:21 GMT -5
oh hey, guys you don't need to keep asking when she'll finish the next one. i know it's taking a long time, but jello has other things to do other than write. so just be patient, she'll get it done when she gets it done. btw, GREAT JOB, JELLO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jan 15, 2012 4:06:36 GMT -5
....sorry for not posting in a LOOOOOONG TIME! But warning: If you don't like sad "endings", dont read! JK! It's not the last chapter. This one is too SHORT!Ch. 14: Mourning... ... The WHOLE town seemed gray. The water seemed gray. The island was gray. The whole WORLD......was gray. Even with all the mountainous foods...the world was...gray. Tim went to the remains of Flint's lab. At least it was still standing. Even the sweet smell of strawberries didn't lighten his mood. For Flint...was dead... "I can't believe this..." He said."First Fran...then..." His eyes became bloodshot. Tears strolleddown his cheeks. No, not tears. He had already cried so much the past three days that there were no tears left in him. Sam came in.She could only say "Steve is gone.He..he left his translator and left.He's as loyal as a dog when..." She looked at the ring. "...when their best... BEST friend has died..." Tim looked at her. "I never became a granfather...I can't have a family now..not at this age...I'm too old...Now that my only son is gone...and my wife too...was I ever meant to have a long lasting family?" Sam looked at the ring. "Yes you were...And Flint knew this too... ... does this feel the same when you lost...Fran...?" Tim didn't look at her. "I loved her. I would do ANYTHING to just make her happy. But I guess she's happy now that Flint is probably at her side. He must be happy too." Sam couldn't hold back her tears. She just couldn't believe this. After all they've been through. All that just to give her something... After Tim left, Sam looked at all of the posters that Flint had on his walls. She had now been there for hours. It had already gotten dark. Sam went to a corner, sat down, put her head in her arms, and cried her heart out with the ring on her finger...
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Jan 15, 2012 23:56:49 GMT -5
nooooooo Flintt noooooooooooooooo Waaaaaaaah this is making me cry TTnTT
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Post by smf on Aug 21, 2013 11:57:39 GMT -5
That was... very wacky. XD You did quite well with the characters, though I'm not sure how Steve got to be that smart(or if he could get that smart. He is still a monkey. ;P). Your method of offing the was actually quite funny, and original(not sure how Steve did it though!). All in all, wonderfully wacky, and well done(though you may want a spell checker next time. 'Pologies).
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Post by Jell-o101 on Sept 18, 2013 19:04:07 GMT -5
I WAS ONLY 13 AT THE TIME! And now that the sequel's here....i noticed I wss WAAAAAY off..... :S
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Post by smf on Sept 19, 2013 14:19:09 GMT -5
Aw, that's okay. I don't think I was very accurate, either.
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Post by Alice on Nov 24, 2013 19:40:43 GMT -5
Sorry for this but is not lo iso, se dice lo hizo
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Post by Alice on Nov 24, 2013 19:56:08 GMT -5
Flint... Dead... Flint... Dead... FLINT DEAD? WHY!?!? I'M WAS MOURNING FOR 10 MINUTES!!!! IF Abnormal1000 see this, i think she gonna be crazy
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Post by smf on Nov 25, 2013 16:55:51 GMT -5
This story's been here a while. Odds are she's already seen it. XP Now, if we could just get Jell-o some time off from school... >.>
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 18, 2014 5:54:44 GMT -5
THAT'S IT! NO MORE WAITING! MY BOOST OF CWACOMISM HAS BURSTED THROUGH THE SEAMS! This may not be like the sequel but SWEET APPLE FRITTER! Might as well finish it! *cracks knuckles and starts typing*
15: COME BACK! STEVE?!
Sam had left the lab. She held the ring tightly. This was the last item he had ever given to her. This ring was a symbol. A symbol of a never-ending love. She put on the ring and wanted to consider herself a Lockwood now. She went to the poppy field where Flint made Sam the Jell-O Dome.
Their very first date.
Well, according to Flint.
Sam couldn't believe that their adventure was finally over. Steve was just a few feet from Sam. He was on a tree. Sam took off her glasses. Steve let out a squeal. Sam looked and just turned away. Steve waved his hands in the air. Sam sighed- Wait. STEVE? Sam adjusted her glasses. Steve was happily waving his monkey arms. Wait, why was he smiling?
"Steve!" Sam got up and ran to the jumping cappuchin. "I thought you were forever gone!"
Steve then quickly took her hand and tried to drag her to something nearby. He used all his strength, yet Sam didn't move. Steve rolled his eyes and pulled the object he wanted to show Sam.
It was the Time Machine!
Sam's eyes went wide open. She quickly moved away from the contraption with fear and anger. "NO NO!" She yelled. "Keep that THING away from me! That thing killed Flint!"
Steve made an angry face. He then brought out a white cloak of some sort. It wasn't just a cloak... It was THE COAT. Flint's coat.
Sam crossed her eyebrows. Steve put his hand through a sleeve and took it out. He then handed it to Sam. Sam stared at the coat. It smelled of peanuts. Sure she was allergic to peanuts, but the smell brought a smile to her face. Sam put an arm into a sleeve. Steve nodded. Sam completely put the coat on. Steve gave a quick nod and brought out a wrench and a bunch of other tools. Sam gave Steve a concerned look.
Steve wanted Sam to fix the Time Machine. And the reason was obvious.
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jul 25, 2014 18:30:31 GMT -5
No comments? Anyone?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2014 18:57:58 GMT -5
HERGMJTKS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! FLINT IS DEAD??!!!! ??!!?!!!! ?? UUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH *sobs* Wait..........FIX DAT TIME MACHINE SAM!!!! BRING FLINT BAAAACK!!!!!!!
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