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Post by ral365 on Nov 3, 2013 23:03:54 GMT -5
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Post by ral365 on Nov 7, 2013 15:48:39 GMT -5
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Post by vhills on Nov 8, 2013 4:53:25 GMT -5
i loved it! well, i still do. read the last chapter last night, oh those FEEELS. i left a better review on ff.net a few days ago ... x3
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Post by ral365 on Nov 8, 2013 8:51:51 GMT -5
I saw! ^^ I just wish ff.net would let me reply so I could thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And it's awesome to hear someone give actual feedback of my work as opposed to just "I like it!" or "It's good!"
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Post by ral365 on Nov 14, 2013 23:08:23 GMT -5
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Post by vhills on Nov 18, 2013 3:37:18 GMT -5
whoa. this is intense! she did a very good job. those FEEEELINGS! --sobs--
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Post by Yellow Dragon on Nov 23, 2013 8:53:23 GMT -5
I liked the fanfic very much in general. Characters and the plot were written very well. However, there was one thing I didn't quite like. It itself is not so bad, but looks strange: looking on the story of your fanfiction (this one was a thinrd take on it that I have read so far), I assume that the main thing you wanted to write you fic about, was Asperger Syndrome. And from this point of view the story was written much better that your previous takes on it, and I see no imperfections here.
But as I see it, you wanted to make this fanfic also a Halloween-themed story and here we have this title - "Creepy with a Chance of Monsters". Your previous fanfic coped with this task very well, but I cannot say this about this one. Even considering the fact that Flint was turned into a monster, his "rampage" lasted less than one chapter and looked more like his misfortune and a reason for other characters' actions, not quite being an action itself. In addition, in your previous fanfic we saw monster Flint as an agressive creature, who purposely attacked and scared people and, at the same time, we saw that some of townspeople took his appearance for a Halloween costume. Yet, in your new fanfic, in the city, where people should be much more spoiled with fancy things (including realistic Halloween costumes) and be overall indifferent to such them, they were much more scared of Flint (who didn't even hurt or chase or try to scare anyone) and no one of them even thought that Flint appearance might have been a costume. Also, it seemed strange for me that one deformed man, who didn't do any physical damage to people or their property, may be considered as a national threat. However, returning to Flint himself, I liked him as a harmless "monster" much more than an agressive one, because I think that with his personality he just cannot be evil in any state.
So, looking at the title of the fanfic, one can assume that it will be some kind of scary story, but actually they get a tale of Asperger Syndrome with a slight hint on Halloween. But here I must emphasize once again that I liked this story very much and all of my criticism covers only a small part of it and reflects only my point of view.
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