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Post by smf on Aug 21, 2013 13:46:49 GMT -5
So, I take it you're only updating this once a month? Or are you busy? (No particular investment in this, since I missed the very beginning, but I WOULD like to see it finished.)
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Post by Jell-o101 on Sept 13, 2013 19:28:33 GMT -5
HOW LONG WAS I GONE?!
Ch. 9: Swiss and Indian
Swiss Girl couldn't sleep at night. She was thinking about Slender Man and that Indian girl with no name. Slender seems too nice to be here in this secret organization. The Indian girl was mute, blind and was said to posses an amazing power that only a creature with her kind of eyes can have.
Swiss Girl got up and sighed. She couldn't guess anything on this Indian girl. Just then, that girl was there with Swiss Girl.
"Were you there the whole time?!" Swiss Girl asked. The Indian Girl just blinked with a face. "Oh...you don't speak OR understand English..."
The Indian Girl smiled and covered her mouth. She saw Swiss Girl in a glowing blue aura. Like in the previous chapter, I wrote down that only creatures with dark skin and bright blue eyes can see creatures at night that isn't visible to any other eye. Those creatures glow blue. To the Indian Girl, Swiss Girl glowed like those creatures.
Swiss Girl blinked. "What's wrong?"The Indian Girl put a finger on Swiss Girl's head. Suddenly, Swiss Girl began to see a vision that was in her mind, yet her very eyes saw it. The images in her mind was like a flashback. She saw a small village in India. A family of three was there: a mother and two little girls. The were begging for food, yet no one gave them money or food. Then the scenery changed with the family going on a trip to the mountains. There was a terrible storm and one of the children got lost. She was lost and alone in the deep snow. At night, it was below ten degrees. The girl had almost frozen to death when she saw blue glowing lights. She followed them, thinking they were people, but they were white bats that glowed of blue. The bats flew away when some people came and found her. It was The Government. And when they took her, she saw that her family was dead. She knew because she saw a body hidden in the snow.
When The Indian Girl moved her finger away from Swiss Girl's forehead, Swiss Girl had a tear in her left eye. Swiss had the power to see people's pasts yet she never knew. Now she knows how The Indian Girl's life went...
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Post by smf on Sept 13, 2013 19:35:47 GMT -5
Mystical... Not bad. *Is fighting the urge to proofread. I don't like making people mad, but I like editing. >.< 'Pologies, that's my problem.*
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Post by GeekyGirl on Oct 8, 2013 0:38:27 GMT -5
Oh wow! There was so much to catch up on!! As always, can't wait for more ^^
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Post by Jell-o101 on Jan 11, 2014 2:03:03 GMT -5
Sorry for not updating! I'm more active on DA and I'm working on a Wreck-It Ralph fanfiction there too. Feel free to read! I'll try to post soon this week!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2014 12:32:14 GMT -5
GREAT STORY!!!
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Post by water42 on Jan 14, 2014 1:03:38 GMT -5
I can't wait for you to update this more!!~ >W< I still really love this story ^^'
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