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Post by water42 on Apr 9, 2011 22:11:45 GMT -5
(This is my first fan fic... It was not all that well put together, so each chapter is a little short... But please still do enjoy.)
Ch 1: New Man in Town It was a nice sunny afternoon day in ChewandSwallow. A few clouds dotted the bright sky. Flint was on his way to ask Sam out for dinner. On his way Brent came up to him and said "Hey flint, did you hear? A new scientist moved to town. Sounds likeyou have some competirion." Flint made a strange face and said "I'm sure your wrong about that." Brent looked at flint and smiled. He said "What ever dude, just watch your back." Brent left and Flint continued to Sam's house. Sam was outside, in her yard watering plants. She was watering flowers by the sidewalk when a man in a lab coat came up to her. He smiled and said "Hello, I just moved to ChewandSwallow. Do you think we could get together soon and you can give me a tour of the town?" Sam looked at him and frowned. She said "I'm sorry, but I can't-' The man cut her off. " It's perfictly understandable, your busy right? Maybe some other time." He grabed Sam's hand and shook it. Light shined off of his glasses and the sun made his read hair glow. He whore a yellow shirt and gray pants. On his feet were a pair of black and white sneakers. He said " My name is Bruce Heartlace, it's nice to meet you. Oh, by the way what's your name?" Sam didn't know what to think. She said" My name's Sam Sparks, I'mthe weather girl in this town." Bruce smiled, hhe had stopped shaking Sam's hand ,but was still holding it. he said "That's so cool, I'm a scientist. I guess you could have told by the lab coat. I moved in right down the street." Flint walked to Sam's house and found Sam and another man holding hands. Flint's eyes widend and he ran up to Sam and put his arm around her. He said "What's going on Sam???" Sam could hear the tensetion in Flint's voice. "I'm not really sure myself." she answered. Bruce let go of Sam's hand and turned to Flint. He sarcasticly said "I'm sorry, I didn't know she was with anyone. My name is Bruce Heartlace. I just moved to town.": He looked at Sam "There are alot of pretty girl's in this town. I think I'm going to like it here." Bruce left and Sam and Flint looked at each other. Flint said "Did he do anything to you Sam?" She said "All he did was say hello andshake my hand." Flint looked at bruce who was going down the street. He said " I guess that's good and why was he wareing a lab coat?" Sam looked at Flint and said "He sadi he was a scientist." Flint put his hand under his chin and mumbled "This must be the scientist Brdnt was talking about, I guess I will have to watch my back and Sam's while I'm at it." Then he looked at Sam "You want to eat somewhere for dinner?" Sam smiled at Flint and nodded. She turned off the water and they left.
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Post by Gemstone108 on Apr 10, 2011 7:05:21 GMT -5
this is pretty good. Keep going!!!!!
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Post by water42 on Apr 10, 2011 13:48:35 GMT -5
(OK, I'm going to write the next chapter... this is something I just wanted to say.. Bruce's last name Heartlace is pronounced heartless.. Later you will find out that it kinda fits him.) Ch 2: Rivals
It was morning, Flint and Sam had just met Bruce the day before. Flint yawned as he pulled on his lab coat. He had just woken up. He turned his TV on to watch Sam's weather forecast. Bruce and a reporter were on TV. He sat down at the table and began to eat his toast. The reporter said "Today we have special guest, Bruce Heartlace. He's a new scientist in town, he is only 22, but has already gotten his masters in college. He has saved people with his inventions since he was 11." With hearing that Flint dropped his toast. He shouted "How is that flirt better then me!!! And it bugs me that he's acting so normal!!" Bruce said "Thank you for having me today. I like this town already and I hope to meet many people while I live here." Flint frowned and turned off the TV. Steve was eating his dropped toast. Flint got up and went outside. Flint went to his dads fishing shop in town. He opened the door to see everyone watching Bruce on the news. Tim had a very worried face when he looked at the TV. Joe Tomne saw Flint and said "Hello Fl-" Flint slammed the door and walked down the street. Flint saw a news van and knew he had gone the wrong way. Bruce was leaning on the side of the van and saw Flint. He said "Well hello, we met yesterday yes? I never got your name." Flint looked at him and said "I'm Flint Lockwood." Bruce smiled and said " I've heard so much about you and from what I hear I'm a way better inventor then you are." Flint looked at him and made a strange angry face. He mumbled to himself "First he was on TV, now he's in my face saying hes better then me. Who does he think he is." Bruce looked at Flint and said "Do you know anything about me? I just graduated from college, what about you?" Flint frowned, he looked at the ground and said "I didn't go to college, there isn't a college in this town." Bruce looked at Flint surprised. He said "I would think you of all people would go to college!" Flint shrugged and said "Not every scientist has to be like you. There are alot of scientists that didn't go to college and were still successful." Bruce smiled and stared at Flint. He said "Your not like any of them, you didn't go to college and your your not successful. Even if you had gone to college I don't think you would have any better luck. Your just to awkward." Flint turned his head, he didn't want Bruce to know that what he said had bothered him as much as it did. Once he got himself under control he stared Bruce in the eyes. He said "You may be a great inventor, but I am too. I've saved my town and the world!!!" Bruce quickly stated "From your own invention." Flint paused as if he was about to say something then dropped his arms in a pout. He said "So, what have you done thats so important?!" Bruce calmly and coolly said "I have saved many lives because I found a cure to a disease and won the Nobel Peace Prize because of it." Flint crossed his arms, mad at his own question. Flint angrily pointed a finger at Bruce. He said "From this day on you are my arch nemeses." Flint stormed off and Bruce had a happy look in his eyes and a big smile on his face.
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Post by Gemstone108 on Apr 10, 2011 14:47:39 GMT -5
why am i the only one commenting on this? this is a great fanfic!!
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Apr 10, 2011 15:23:14 GMT -5
OH MY GOD IT'S AMAZING. lol, why do i like bruce so much? i hate his type of character but... OH MY GOD I LOVE HIM X3
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Post by water42 on Apr 10, 2011 15:35:57 GMT -5
I think Jello really likes Bruce to... He's just a likeable guy. Thanks for all the coments, I really hope you like it... This is a heads up. In the next book I wrote with Bruce in it, theres a BIG twist, and I also made up how Flint's MOM died.....
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Post by Gemstone108 on Apr 10, 2011 15:53:51 GMT -5
awsome!!!! cant wait ;D
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Post by water42 on Apr 10, 2011 17:54:40 GMT -5
(I feel bad for Flint in this chapter...) Ch 3: Missing Monkey It was early afternoon, the town was quiet. Bruce was on his way to get something for lunch. He saw Sam heading to the News station. He followed her until they were on a street where no one else was. Bruce came up behind Sam and hugged her. Sam thought it was Flint because of the lab coat. She turned around smiling and said "What are you doing Fli-" Flint was going to the News station to ask Sam if she had an idea of what he could invent next. He went in the building and talked to the man at the front desk. He said "Hello, is Sam Sparks here?" The man gave Flint a funny look and said "I thought you would know, Sam didn't show up today." Flint raised an eyebrow and stated "She didn't show up for work today? I guess I'll go look for her." He left the News station and went down the streets Sam normally took to the New station. He was walking along a fence, he was about to turn on to the next street when he heard voices. He poked his head out from behind the fence. His eyes widened and he felt a sharp pain in his chest. What he saw both scared and hurt him. He saw Bruce holding Sam from behind and she was smiling. When Sam started turning around Flint hid himself back behind the fence and listened to what they were saying. Sam's eyes shrunk "What are you doing Bruce!?" She pushed him away hard. He tripped over his own feet and fell. He made a strange embarrassed face. He got up and dusted him self off. He said "Well, that was embarrassing... Admit it Sam you liked it. You were smiling at me. Whats with the sad face?" Sam crossed her arms, she felt like crying. She said "You tricked me into thinking you were Flint!" Flint was surprised by what he had heard and looked at them from behind the fence. Bruce lifted an eyebrow and smiled. He said "You have that wrong, I didn't trick you. Your the one who thought I was Flint. Think about it, it felt right. Me holding you like that felt right to you, that's why you thought I was Flint!" Flint was mad, he could fell the anger on his face. Bruce stopped smiling and had a concerned face. He said "Why don't you like me?" He tried to hug her and Sam pushed him away. She said "I'm with Flint and only Flint!!" Bruce gave her a questionable look and said "Why do you like him, he puts you and all his other friends in danger!?" Sam looked at him with anger in her in her eyes and said "Flint made me believe in myself by telling me that I should just be me." By hearing that Flint became the happiest man in ChewandSwallow and while being the happiest man in ChewandSwallow he forgot to make sure he wasn't seen. Bruce saw Flint out of the corner of his eye then looked at Sam. He said "You should be with me, I saw the way the way you looked at me when we first met. You like me, I could see it in your eyes." Bruce turned and started walking away. Sam dropped her jaw and quickly shouted after him. "I'M PRETTY SURE THE ONLY THING YOU SAW IN MY EYES WAS YOUR COCKY REFLECTION!!!" Flint was so mad that he started to walk after him, fell down, hit his head on a rock, and passed out. When Flint woke up he was still on the ground and determined to beat Bruce. He got up and ran to his lab. He was there for days, because he had a problem...Flint couldn't think of anything to invent. He even tried having Steve help him, but he still couldn't think of anything. Steve scratched at the door, Flint let him out. Flint closed the door and went back to thinking. Steve saw a butterfly and stated to chase it shouting *ORANGE*. Bruce was walking by and saw Steve. He looked around to make sure no one was watching and snuk up behind Steve. He grabbed Steve and ran back to his house as fast as he could. Flint looked at a clock and mumbled "Steve should have been back by now, maybe I should look for him." Flint looked every where for him. Sam saw Flint and walked up to him. He was in a tree. Sam said "What are you doing Flint?" Flint looked down at Sam and said "I'm looking for Steve. Hes been missing for hours." Sam looked around and said "I'll go get people to help us look." Sam left and came back ten minutes later with Brent, Tim, and Manny. They looked everywhere for Steve and couldn't find him. Flint crossed his arms and said ":I have a hunch that my arch nemeses took Steve." Sam looked at Flint and frowned. She said "You know, you can't blame everything on him." Flint didn't know what to do. Trying to think of an invention was hard enough, mow he had to find Steve too. Flint was in his lab thinking. He said "I got it, giant magnet!!! Wait" Flint mumbled "That would probably hurt a lot of people." Slamming his head on his desk he said " I don't know what to do!!" Bruce had something in his hand. It and his glasses glistened in the dimly lit lab. It was a needle and he looked at Steve, who was sitting in a cage. Bruce had a big smile on his face. He said "Your going to help me out little buddy." Steve started whimpering in the cage, holding his tail he said *SCARED*
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Bubblez12
Ratbird
you can't spell slaughter without laughter
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Post by Bubblez12 on Apr 10, 2011 20:23:29 GMT -5
Dude ya Jello told me about this story pretty awesome bout flint's mother story redrum spell tht backwards!!!!!!
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Post by water42 on Apr 10, 2011 21:06:45 GMT -5
MURDER...... Yep!!!
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Post by Remorse on Apr 11, 2011 13:51:20 GMT -5
IT'S AWSOME, PLEZZ KEEP THE POSTS A COMIN!
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Post by water42 on Apr 11, 2011 19:59:38 GMT -5
(Chapter four is very short...) Ch 4: Getting Nowhere Flint was in his lab. He had been in there for days trying to think of something. He hadn't eaten or drank anything in three days. For not eating in three days he looked skinnier and more noodle like. He was worried about not being able to think of anything to invent. He was so worried that he couldn't even think of eating. Flint opened his desk drow and pulled out an old piece of paper with many different kinds of ideas on it. His hands shook and his eyes focused on the paper, he yelled "Everyone of them can hurt people or end in disaster!!" He laid his arms on his desk and buried his head in them. Suddenly the life returned to Flint. He looked up with a smile on his face. He said "Wait, every great idea was made with many failures before them." He put his fists high in the air and shouted "I may not have an idea, but my hopes are back up!!!" Flint put his finger on his mouth thinking. Bruce was in his lab (Basement). Working on his computer. He had taken blood and hair samples from Steve, who laid unconscious in the cage. Bruce had been trying to clone Steve but it had failed. He sat staring at his computer screen, trying to figure out what he did wrong. He gave up on it and started to think of what to do next. He had what he thought was his best idea ever. He had an evil look in his eyes and a big creepy smile on his face. He spent five hours making his invention. By the time he was done Steve was awake. Bruce walked up to the cage and said "Are you ready to help me again?" Steve looked at him and growled. He said *YOUR LUKY... YOU DON'T HAVE A..... MUSTACHE!!!* Bruce looked at Steve and said "Don't talk to me like that Steve, I thought we were friends." He took Steve out of the cage and put him on a bed, then put a strange helmet on his head. He went to the other side of the room, flipped a switch and pressed a button. His invention lit up and flashed. Steve screamed so loudly he hurt his own ears. Bruce smiled while he watched Steve suffer from his invention.
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Post by RainbowLuvsFlint on Apr 12, 2011 19:18:59 GMT -5
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW D: poor steve hey, can i draw a scene from this? or... two...?
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Post by water42 on Apr 12, 2011 19:48:30 GMT -5
Sure rainbow..... post it so I can see when your done.... Truth be told there is already pictures for this fanfic I just can't get them online
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steve4o9
Sardine
So i tryed to fly recently...i kinda floped in two different directions..MY HAIR LOOKED AMAZING THO!
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Post by steve4o9 on Apr 13, 2011 19:11:37 GMT -5
haha i think this story is funny and jello and u r awesome writers!!!!!!
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